
Gou Chu
by Shuangzhoulk
About This Novel
Rong Yu is a cook who cooks 258 common things and 369 people.
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Official(31)Scraped 7d ago
I suggest that if the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, then he shouldn't write in such detail, and just focus on writing systematic articles! This book is an urban emotional text wrapped in a system! But the system's sense of existence is pitifully low! A male protagonist who has obtained the system through time travel and rebirth does not even dare to accept a beautiful woman, and must find various reasons to refuse! Really fake and cowardly! I feel like the male protagonist is a loser! People who have lived a new life still have to worry about these things? The author is advised to get to know those who have truly experienced life and death, and feel their attitude towards life!
It's really good. I enjoyed watching it with gusto.
A good book will make people feel happy and have clear ideas.
come on! Come on come on
From the previous book, it's pretty good, I like your style.
Everything about this book is good, but it's too new. I still need to keep it up.
Give some advice
1: The protagonist seems to be too attractive personally. Basically, there must be something to do with the presence of so many female characters. It always makes me feel like I am reading a harem novel (everyone loves and loves everyone), but the subject matter of the article is like describing the normal life of an ordinary 27-year-old man (that is, the various plots are very close to reality and simple and true). 2: My feeling is that the characterization of the male and female protagonists is not full, especially the relationship between Duoduo and the two. I feel that the relationship between the two is just that of friends. Previously, I always thought that they would just get along for a while and then go their separate ways to pursue their dreams. However, the ending is that the two of them are happy, so the sudden intrusion of the female protagonist into the male protagonist's life is too abrupt. (The female protagonist's status is too low. Too much writing. There is no logical connection between the whole characters, which is very awkward) Then there is the process of the relationship between the man and woman from the beginning to "my man" and "my woman" to the husband and wife. To put it bluntly, everyone had a playful attitude at the beginning, but how did it turn into a life-or-death love? The author wrote it very obscurely or I didn't understand it. 3: There are many expressions in the article that express the male protagonist's three views. I feel that some of them are very real, humane and have the atmosphere of real life. But when these are all integrated into one person, it feels awkward.
Beautiful, well written, a rare masterpiece
The poems quoted are fresh. Sooner or later it will be made into a TV series
So well written! The author has a profound foundation in ancient poetry
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Official(31)Scraped 7d ago
I suggest that if the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, then he shouldn't write in such detail, and just focus on writing systematic articles! This book is an urban emotional text wrapped in a system! But the system's sense of existence is pitifully low! A male protagonist who has obtained the system through time travel and rebirth does not even dare to accept a beautiful woman, and must find various reasons to refuse! Really fake and cowardly! I feel like the male protagonist is a loser! People who have lived a new life still have to worry about these things? The author is advised to get to know those who have truly experienced life and death, and feel their attitude towards life!
It's really good. I enjoyed watching it with gusto.
A good book will make people feel happy and have clear ideas.
come on! Come on come on
From the previous book, it's pretty good, I like your style.
Everything about this book is good, but it's too new. I still need to keep it up.
Give some advice
1: The protagonist seems to be too attractive personally. Basically, there must be something to do with the presence of so many female characters. It always makes me feel like I am reading a harem novel (everyone loves and loves everyone), but the subject matter of the article is like describing the normal life of an ordinary 27-year-old man (that is, the various plots are very close to reality and simple and true). 2: My feeling is that the characterization of the male and female protagonists is not full, especially the relationship between Duoduo and the two. I feel that the relationship between the two is just that of friends. Previously, I always thought that they would just get along for a while and then go their separate ways to pursue their dreams. However, the ending is that the two of them are happy, so the sudden intrusion of the female protagonist into the male protagonist's life is too abrupt. (The female protagonist's status is too low. Too much writing. There is no logical connection between the whole characters, which is very awkward) Then there is the process of the relationship between the man and woman from the beginning to "my man" and "my woman" to the husband and wife. To put it bluntly, everyone had a playful attitude at the beginning, but how did it turn into a life-or-death love? The author wrote it very obscurely or I didn't understand it. 3: There are many expressions in the article that express the male protagonist's three views. I feel that some of them are very real, humane and have the atmosphere of real life. But when these are all integrated into one person, it feels awkward.
Beautiful, well written, a rare masterpiece
The poems quoted are fresh. Sooner or later it will be made into a TV series
So well written! The author has a profound foundation in ancient poetry














