Starting from the Sea of ​​chaos Stars, it Brings Harm to the Heavens

I can't stand watching the soul bone absorption. Although there may not be such a setting, I still can't accept that a person who can cultivate immortals will go to Douluo and replace his own bones. Most Douluo's Zhutianliu have this problem. It would be fine if you were alone in Douluo Continent, but the problem is that you can cultivate immortals on the mortal side, and you have no shortage of combat power. If there is any crisis, it is fine. But after breaking through the foundation and not afraid of Qian Daoliu and others, you replaced your own bones with those of the wolf thief. Very suddenly, you suddenly decided to change the soul bone. What do you think if you go to a mortal again? Someone with more ability will take a look at you and realize that this person's bones are not original? There is obviously a better way, dual spiritual roots, good talent, golden fingers, foundation-building monks, fairy grass, skills that can still be cultivated to the stage of divine transformation, talismans, formations, and all kinds of trump cards in hand, and there are no enemies. So, how short-sighted people must be to choose to change their own bones?

I started following the new book not long after it came out, but when I got close to the latest chapter, I had to say something. It was specially arranged for A Rou to meet the two brothers Tang Hao, and according to your statement, A Rou and Tang Hao should be together, give birth to Tang San, and then have sex with Xiao Wu, but let's not talk about the risks of the review for now. As for this plot arrangement, you have to think about it. Now you are not just writing about Douluo fans. You are writing about Zhutian. You have to consider whether some Zhutianliu readers who have never read Douluo fans can accept this plot? Will it feel uncomfortable? To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. It would be great if you accepted Xiao Wu like you did in the previous book. Even if you don't accept it, just skip it. There is plenty of content to write about in the world. There is really no need to write such controversial content. If it weren't for your sake as the author, I would have given up on the plot when I saw it.

These writings are too pretentious and upright. You are no better than Tang San. You have traveled to another world. What do you still care about the basic bottom line of human beings in another world? Where is Douluo Continent? The rich and powerful are supreme, just like the caste system in India, but you still think about them. You came from a mortal cultivating the world, so what are you pretending to do? How do you make it look so upright? Do you still want to imitate Tang San? What you have done is what you have done. Plus you are using Wanhun Sail. Why are you pretending to be thinking about mankind? What kind of Holy Mother do you think you are?

The book is very good, but I feel that it may be cut out of the book. Firstly, it is for follow-up reading, and secondly, because the protagonist's training system is too complicated. The author's energy will be restrained in the later period, and his thinking may be disordered. To be honest, the mortal system is the highest at present, and there is no need to practice other systems. Dou It's okay to be angry, but to be honest, I really can't figure out Douluo. What's so good about repairing a sewer? It has also absorbed soul bones and soul rings. Whether it can be used under the suppression of the higher laws of heaven and earth is still open to debate. Just like ascension, do the expressions of the human world and the spiritual world have the same expression? There are completely two levels, so Qingjiao might as well arrange an opportunity in the later stage to wash away all the miscellaneous things on the protagonist's body. Otherwise, the protagonist in the book will also be fascinated, and a few hands will make him unable to reach a high level or a low level. As the saying goes, wash away the lead, Fang Zhengdao @ Dingjia A Zhai

Mortals in the first world, Douluo in the second world, and Hokage in the third world. The author never hides his desires, and the protagonist never hides his desire to have a harem. Including Uchiha Mikoto, who is married and has children in Naruto. The plot is so-so, all worlds are the same as human beings, if one world doesn't work, just change it to another one. Anyway, the protagonist has not encountered a desperate situation, nor has there been any adversity. Either they are cultivating and developing, or they are keeping a harem to pretend to be mean. At present, there are two biggest poisonous points. One is that cheats can take people through time travel in the early stage, while the protagonist starts taking women through time in the foundation building stage. Second, the protagonist has a child in the foundation stage. The harem will share the plot of each character, and childbirth is a poisonous point. This is an astronomical novel, not an urban novel. Love and love are not well written, but only desire and conquest. Having a child when you are weak is tantamount to leaving yourself a huge flaw. The follow-up, whether it is about raising a child or abandoning a child, is a garbage plot. Because there may be authors who can write about harems and children at the same time, but there are definitely not many.

There must be a lot of poisonous points. Why do so many women want to be treated as young women? Moreover, I feel that pregnancy and childbirth are also poisonous points.

What kind of rubbish Naruto? I don't want to watch Naruto when I see it.

Damn, I don't know what I can think about in Chapter 7. It's so damn poisonous. You can kill directly, pretending to write nonsense, kill directly if you have the strength, and still pretending there. It's so fucking funny. What's the difference between what you did and Tang San? The villain is perfect. If you want to kill, just kill. If you don't want to kill, don't kill. It's very annoying if you can't get up or down. Don't you find it annoying if you just pretend? It's really funny that you're still pretending to be hostile after you've already shown your hostility. You want to kill someone in the first place, but you still have to find a legitimate reason to pretend. How did you get 8 points for this book? Chapter 7 starts poisoning

Le, I thought there were no second-hand ones, but I ended up buying Uchiha Mikoto, 😐

The content and settings are good, and the writing is also very good, but there are some places that I personally think are not good. It was too hasty to have a child with Mikoto. Having a child so early has many burdens and weaknesses. Moreover, it is too far-fetched to have a relationship with Mikoto in mainland China, and the means of controlling her heart are too unreliable, and she is a second-hand product. They are all not as good as Tsunade, Yegura, and Hinata. As for Tsunade, she can still go back to the time before she was spied on and before she had a boyfriend. It is not a good time to exterminate the clan. It is unnecessary to practice immortality in the heavens and have children. After cultivating to transcendence in the end, you can have children if you want them or not. I suggest the author think about it again.