Have the Original Planet with You

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, please collect it, ask for recommendation votes, and all kinds of requests. I hope everyone can give some pertinent opinions while reading the book. The author will accept it with an open mind, but please don't spray nonsense. It's not easy for newbies. Thank you all.

After reading a few chapters, I wanted to make some suggestions. Then I saw the chapter where the protagonist was discussing cooperation with a hotel, which was really embarrassing. The author has a good beginning and there is so much to write about. But you have to be more careful! Some of the pictures I've seen are too rough. For example, when you return to the rental house for the first time and look at your phone, you know that the time ratio is 1-60 only after 6 minutes? The rent for renting a warehouse of 10,000 yuan is directly reduced to 2,000 yuan. Is your family doing this business? What makes me most uncomfortable is that you sell crabs at the gate of the community? Such top-notch ingredients are your time to show off. At this time, you can pretend to be B openly. No reader will have any objections. . Although the author writes a pleasant article, can he be more detailed? A little more detail. For example, can't we verify the ratio between space and real time a few more times? For example, if we first lower the rent by 200, and then the protagonist grinds it out, then lower it to 1,800, wouldn't it be more life-like?

Above, as the title says, how many more chapters will be added every day?

Suddenly it became popular and TikTok fans exceeded 100 million 😕😕😕😕 The following is too exaggerated (not a professional troll) Goodbye,,,,,

It feels like you are writing a composition.

The same routine, starting to take off, and then slapping my ex-girlfriend in the face, it was disgusting to watch.

To be honest, if you don't know how to write romance, don't write it. It looks awkward and the writing on a good subject is poorly written. There are many novels that I just don't have the strength to write. To be honest, not many people come in because they want to see you write romance, right? I have time to write awkward articles and think about how to develop the planet! When I saw the title of the book, I came in and showed me the pretentious and slap-in-the-face text. To be honest, nowadays, the pretentious and slap-in-the-face text is one of the most poisonous things on the Internet.

It's another ancient martial arts book, what's the point of fighting and killing? Isn't it nice to farm leisurely?

The beginning of the story is okay, but the rest of the story falls apart!

It's so boring, pig's feet have no brains,