
I Won't Pretend Anymore. in Fact, I'm Leading a Special Forces Unit
by Ziyanyou
About This Novel
It's the enlistment season again, and the new recruit company has gathered together a group of unruly and unruly thorns once in a century! When everyone was at their wits' end, Qin Yuan recommended himself as the recruit company commander and began to build the strongest special forces! In the annual large-scale military exercises, new recruit companies were allowed to participate and were responsible for simple logistical support. However, as the red side was retreating steadily, a magical scene appeared on the battlefield. The leader of a reconnaissance regiment of the Blue Army: "Report! The Red Army cheated! Our reinforcement group was defeated by the enemy's special forces, but the enemy found a poor excuse to call themselves a company of new recruits!" The commander of a rocket brigade of the Blue Army: "Can't you afford to lose? Special forces are not allowed to participate in this exercise! Your Red Army actually dispatched special forces here?" The superior of the Blue Army roared angrily: "That's nonsense! Use special forces to shoot me in the head against the rules? Are you still claiming that you are a recruit company?" Qin Yuan smiled faintly: No more pretending, in fact... I am leading a special forces unit!
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Official(326)Scraped 4d ago
Looks good all the time
I look forward to the day when this book will become a god. Don't be a eunuch. Tomorrow I won't vote for my own book in the 5 recommendation votes. I will vote for you. Brothers, please give me some effort and get the number one spot on the new book list.
There's nothing wrong with cool writing, it's more individualistic
For example, there are troops who only serve themselves, not the army that protects the homeland and the country. There are also new recruits whose overall quality is superior to that of the regular troops, and almost each has its own advantages and strengths. On the way back to camp, there are 80 meals, but they compete with each other to eat instead of eating less. They try to eat as much as possible, without considering the unity among comrades. But if placed in Shuangwen, it can be understood as an independent character, perseverance, and unlucky luck. It is also a foreshadowing that the new recruits need to be taught by the protagonist. Although I don't like this genre, overall it was a pretty good book.
good,
I think what you wrote is good. But I hope the protagonist doesn't have to be awesome alone. As a soldier, everyone must have his or her own character. Come on.
Long suite building
Build a package building, everyone is welcome to build it Format: decent or villain, name, nickname, ability, power, dream, ending, etc.
It is difficult to train a company of new recruits, but if it is done well, for everyone, it may be said that there are only advantages and no disadvantages for each company. Although it is difficult to train those outstanding people, it may be because they have not met strong people.
To put it nicely, it's a relatively retro novice. To put it badly, it's just a draft.
1. No matter how bad the protagonist is in the original world, with the addition of the system, he will immediately become top-notch. There is a big difference between skills and abilities! In the early stage, you should carefully describe the characters. Before the characters are established, you will rush to write and slap them in the face. 2. Do you have momentum if you have skill points? Some things come from hard work. The King of Soldiers is strategist and wolf-like. How about you, with the momentum of holding a bunch of skill points? 3. The army has always emphasized discipline. If a good guy comes to you, he will be wiped out immediately. Subordinates push back and recruits disobey discipline. No one dares to take care of it. 4. There are always a bunch of new recruits who are so awesome that even the company commander can't hold them down, so just recruit people like this. Why do you need a company commander? Or was it because there were no such recruits in the first place and the protagonist had to catch up? 5. To sum up, this is a novice, fantasy, and system flow with a military name.
The regiment leader really rewarded him a lot for being able to find people to train new recruits. Although this temptation was great, everyone also hesitated. It can be said that they have more than enough energy but not enough.
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Official(326)Scraped 4d ago
Looks good all the time
I look forward to the day when this book will become a god. Don't be a eunuch. Tomorrow I won't vote for my own book in the 5 recommendation votes. I will vote for you. Brothers, please give me some effort and get the number one spot on the new book list.
There's nothing wrong with cool writing, it's more individualistic
For example, there are troops who only serve themselves, not the army that protects the homeland and the country. There are also new recruits whose overall quality is superior to that of the regular troops, and almost each has its own advantages and strengths. On the way back to camp, there are 80 meals, but they compete with each other to eat instead of eating less. They try to eat as much as possible, without considering the unity among comrades. But if placed in Shuangwen, it can be understood as an independent character, perseverance, and unlucky luck. It is also a foreshadowing that the new recruits need to be taught by the protagonist. Although I don't like this genre, overall it was a pretty good book.
good,
I think what you wrote is good. But I hope the protagonist doesn't have to be awesome alone. As a soldier, everyone must have his or her own character. Come on.
Long suite building
Build a package building, everyone is welcome to build it Format: decent or villain, name, nickname, ability, power, dream, ending, etc.
It is difficult to train a company of new recruits, but if it is done well, for everyone, it may be said that there are only advantages and no disadvantages for each company. Although it is difficult to train those outstanding people, it may be because they have not met strong people.
To put it nicely, it's a relatively retro novice. To put it badly, it's just a draft.
1. No matter how bad the protagonist is in the original world, with the addition of the system, he will immediately become top-notch. There is a big difference between skills and abilities! In the early stage, you should carefully describe the characters. Before the characters are established, you will rush to write and slap them in the face. 2. Do you have momentum if you have skill points? Some things come from hard work. The King of Soldiers is strategist and wolf-like. How about you, with the momentum of holding a bunch of skill points? 3. The army has always emphasized discipline. If a good guy comes to you, he will be wiped out immediately. Subordinates push back and recruits disobey discipline. No one dares to take care of it. 4. There are always a bunch of new recruits who are so awesome that even the company commander can't hold them down, so just recruit people like this. Why do you need a company commander? Or was it because there were no such recruits in the first place and the protagonist had to catch up? 5. To sum up, this is a novice, fantasy, and system flow with a military name.
The regiment leader really rewarded him a lot for being able to find people to train new recruits. Although this temptation was great, everyone also hesitated. It can be said that they have more than enough energy but not enough.













