Douluo: in Seclusion for Thousands of Years, He Kidnapped Gu Yuena at the Beginning

The Qian Renxue Divine Examination was maliciously sabotaged by the gods. In the original work, there was a test where one faced the darkness and was manipulated by the gods. Bibi Dong was also affected by the evil thoughts of the Rakshasa god I really want to see how disgusting and double-standard Tang San is in reality

Hee hee, haha, oh haha, Wuhu, awesome

A woman has been with the protagonist for thousands of years, and if the protagonist opens a harem, how is that any different from those scumbag men? To be honest, these people travel through Douluo every day to open a harem and take in Zhu Zhuqing. I feel numb. I call Dai Mubai a scumbag. Are you different? At least they didn't take it home. Your harem is full of flowers, and people can still accept you. I'm really impressed. Even Tang San can't compare with it. At least Tang San is relatively loyal to love.

Personally, I still like the comic version of Ning Fengzhi. The anime version is too elegant and soft, but this is still cool.

Why do so many people read it after I only wrote 18 chapters? I've written more than 70,000 words and no one wants to read Douluo, which is neither a system nor a cool novel.

To be honest, this is the starting point for giving so much time. As a result, when the plot started, it took a thousand years, but the result was still level 99, even worse than Qian Daoliu, Bo Saixi, and Tang Clan. To be honest, it was really useless. A book about a protagonist who can't be saved even by tying a barrel,

First of all, I personally think the writing style of this book is quite good, and I can praise it for that. However, it is a bit watery, and it looks a bit hazy, and the main line is a bit hazy. Secondly, I personally feel that the emotional line is not very well done. Although the heroine is Gu Yuena and she is also on base, I still feel that the relationship between the two is a bit different on a daily basis. After all, they just walk and chat together every day and get first blood? ! Still looking a little confused. But forget it, the point is why can't we have some daily love affairs after the first blood? Like kiss or something! It still feels pretty much the same as before. (Personally, I feel that since the main plot is a bit hazy, I can write some small interactions between the male and female protagonists, so that it will be more interesting to read.) Finally, if this book is about a single heroine, please don't have so much contact with other women, such as Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor, because personally I feel that since you have contact with her, I wonder if the protagonist will accept her later, but if he doesn't accept her in the end, it will be a little uncomfortable. If there are multiple female protagonists, please make the emotional line better and not too far-fetched, so that it looks better to me personally. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better!

The writing is rubbish, I don't understand what the protagonist is doing at all, and there is no outline. I guess those who read this book should be like me, just because they are Gu Yuena fans! I read this book because I saw Gu Yuena. What a pity, it's so rubbish!

Gu Yuena's beautiful photos are guaranteed to look good.

Get the little dance boy, bake it and give it to Tang San to eat