Walker of the Eternal Heavens
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A mysterious crystal stone can not only have eternal life, but can also travel in the heavens. In this way, Chen Changge, who obtained the crystal stone, left legends in the world.
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Official(9)Scraped 12d ago
What you wrote is not clear enough
If the protagonist's golden finger only has two functions, then it's not a good thing. Anyone with a higher level of cultivation than the protagonist can find this thing. You just disappeared in front of you, and you are so verbose when writing about Yitian Slaying Dragon. Generally speaking, war plots can be written faster. You talk too much. We are watching the plot, and there are many places I want to complain about!
Strength persuaded him to retreat, and Yang Guang fought for Goryeo. How do you write this?
Strength persuaded him to retreat, and Yang Guang fought for Goryeo. How do you write this?
Then the master shouldn't have given him the Nine Yin Scriptures
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"""" Yitian Sword" is given to him
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The author's strength persuades him to quit. It's a bit messy. Personally don't like it.
He actually didn't explain the time travel, nor did he get the Nine Yang Magic Skill😗
Is it the Haisha Gang or the Jinsha Gang? It's so confusing.
Hi
Well, just a few comments wouldn't be too much. Although I haven't read this book yet, I still don't want to go to Changdu.
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water
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Official(9)Scraped 12d ago
What you wrote is not clear enough
If the protagonist's golden finger only has two functions, then it's not a good thing. Anyone with a higher level of cultivation than the protagonist can find this thing. You just disappeared in front of you, and you are so verbose when writing about Yitian Slaying Dragon. Generally speaking, war plots can be written faster. You talk too much. We are watching the plot, and there are many places I want to complain about!
Strength persuaded him to retreat, and Yang Guang fought for Goryeo. How do you write this?
Strength persuaded him to retreat, and Yang Guang fought for Goryeo. How do you write this?
Then the master shouldn't have given him the Nine Yin Scriptures
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"""" Yitian Sword" is given to him
generally
The author's strength persuades him to quit. It's a bit messy. Personally don't like it.
He actually didn't explain the time travel, nor did he get the Nine Yang Magic Skill😗
Is it the Haisha Gang or the Jinsha Gang? It's so confusing.
Hi
Well, just a few comments wouldn't be too much. Although I haven't read this book yet, I still don't want to go to Changdu.
Daily check-in will bring you a wave of experience.
Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water
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