I Am Cultivating Immortality in Naruto

Six Threats to Red Panda (Funny)

Many people in the ninja world have the lofty ideal of saving the ninja world and bringing peace to it. How come the values ​​of some modern time-travelers who have been influenced by the core socialist values ​​are not as good as those of the indigenous people? And they all like to beat Kaguya? Can't we better understand the outside world through Kaguya? Why not change the one-village-one-nation system? A country whose violent institutions are not controlled by the state is truly a sick institution. Moreover, there are only very few ninjas, and most of them are civilians. They are not as considerate as the early days of the Akatsuki organization. The history before the establishment of the Five Great Ninja Villages was as blank as duckweed.

By the way, although Haku's Ice Release in the anime is powerful, it can only deal with ordinary ninjas. Beings like tailed beasts are not enough to watch. However, the potential of each blood inheritance limit is actually very great. It depends on how the protagonist develops it~~~Huh? Can Ice Release also develop a skill similar to Susanoo?

What is the biggest advantage of a time traveler? Plot? No, no, no, you know, the butterfly effect is no joke. The biggest advantage is of course your imagination! Because of their horizons, the time traveler's imagination is much larger than that of the characters in the original plot. Ice Escape, they can only play with ice particles at most, but the time traveler is different. He can dig deep into the limits of blood inheritance, such as developing the temperature of ice escape, the hardness of ice escape, and if he gets more awesome, he can change the ice escape to ice made of heavy water. Isn't it delicious? As for the conditions for freezing, isn't there chakra?

You said that if you want to become an immortal, you should become an immortal. After all, you have spoiled everything. Although the arrangement is reasonable, you spoiled it too much. You also said that you have eyes that can see through fate. [Emot=default,38/] You are a whirlpool. The clan is too NB And I think some people should just die. There is no need to resurrect them. Although they are Naruto fans, they can be frivolous, but the original plot of Naruto must still be retained. I don't mean anything else, just a rant. I feel like everything shouldn't be too "perfect." After all, there is Naruto first and then there are fandoms. I hope it won't collapse in the future. The content is still good. There are too few good books nowadays. (Do not spray)

I can't save Lin. Oh, that's good. Say goodbye.

Author, if you can really create a power system for cultivating immortals based on Naruto, then it's really incredible that you don't care if your writing is good or not.

No, it's not true cultivation. There is no cultivation method.

A few suggestions and questions. See the first 15 chapters. The book is okay for reading, but I personally don't like it very much. The pace is too fast, right? Before Chapter 15, he will have the strength of a special jounin. Even if 12 Xiaoqiang's family conditions are so good and he has been cultivating for so many years, what is his level after graduation? The starting point is 0 and there is nothing. If you force it through, the ninjutsu will not turn around. Oh, I actually invented a new way to master the changes in the five properties. So those jounin are all mentally retarded? After so many years, you can't even compare to a kid who just took a notebook and studied without learning for a long time? How long have you just understood what ninjutsu is? I guess I don't have any systematic learning theory knowledge at all. None of them relied solely on Minato's notes. This Minato isn't Uncle Snake either, is he? You said Uncle Snake could barely make it right. Then what to learn in Yin Yang Dun and various ninjutsu. This can be explained by talent. Then started trying the bloodstain combination directly? ? ? What new ninjutsu can be developed casually? This awesomeness can no longer be said to have broken through the sky. It is so awesome that it has broken through the dimensional wall and come to reality, right? If you can do this casually, then everyone else will live like a dog? Author, can you come to terms with yourself? Just an ordinary surgeon and then time travel to a child with great talent. It's not scientific in the first place, but this is too false. I guess what you wrote is not an invincible article, right? Then the content is a bit empty... A world-class intelligence-reducing halo. I suggest you write more details and slow down the pace. The hanging must be turned on, otherwise it would be worse if you wear nothing else? But the slightly written setting is reasonable and realistic. Otherwise, why not just write cool articles? Finally, I still support you. I hope you work hard and don't want to be a eunuch. Don't look at me basking on it. In fact, I still respect every author very much. At least I dare not if you dare to write. If I had to write it, it would definitely be a mess. The pen is in your hand and you are writing your story. I can't fuck you, so I can only stay here. Coming from someone who has been reading books for almost ten years. Anyway, no one is reading this book review. Five stars won't ask you to review a book. Find something to do for yourself if you have nothing to do.

In the end, nothing changed, but it made things a little more troublesome. The outcome of the major events in the original work did not change, but it became worse because of the intervention of the protagonist. Especially Lin, it made me feel very uncomfortable.