Bloody Game

Xue Fan woke up, and he came to a small boat parked in a boundless void of absolute darkness. Xue Fan was very unlucky. He had just become familiar with the fleet where he was born, and he was ruthlessly thrown into this void. It was very ruthless.

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Xue Fan was abandoned. He looked lonely at the note they left when they left. There were several ways to leave it. Xue Fan was very angry when he saw it. He thought that if he could see them again in the future, he must avenge this abandonment.

The data is too exaggerated. It takes hundreds of millions of years to cultivate a Nascent Soul. Can you live for such a long time? H Many things were not explained clearly, such as the relationship between real cultivation and game cultivation. The interpersonal relationships are too abrupt, so it's better to avoid them, such as the inexplicable marriage between Hu Xiaoyun and Xue Fan. For example, that person from the business alliance wanted to be friends with him out of nowhere, and even went to his house, and even made nonsense about how he couldn't live in his own family. It was too blunt. In fact, it would be better if the female protagonist and male supporting characters were all deleted.

Maybe I, a ten-year-old bookworm, have too picky tastes. Many details that need to be described are not described, The content is too blunt and the characterization is not realistic enough. All in all, just one word: too embarrassing

The skill "Fatal Poison" is to apply poison to the weapon. So, what is the use of this skill? (┯_┯ Even if you don't have skills, the enemy will be poisoned just like applying poison to the weapon.

The front and back are not smooth, it's too out of the ordinary, I think it's just so-so

Is this your game? There is no process, just give the reward directly.

There are so many grammatical errors and typos that I am really speechless.

At the beginning, he was a good match for the powerful, but after entering the game, an extra wife appeared inexplicably, and he continued to be a good match.