I, Missile Hongjun, Join the Chat Group
About This Novel
Fang Zhou traveled to the prehistoric world and became Hongjun Taoist Ancestor. But something is not quite right about this prehistoric world. Da Luo jumped a hundred meters, and the Seven Sages barely destroyed the city. He was a dignified Taoist who tried his best to flatten a slightly larger hilltop but was out of breath. What a disgrace! Fortunately, at this time, the All Worlds chat group appeared. [Taoist Hongjun, join the chat group] Huashan Junzi Sword: Welcome newcomers. Qingmao Mountain Cicada Boy: Welcome newcomers. Facing the noise of the chat group, Fang Zhou silently looked at the screen and said nothing. And the other side. Shen Daxian, the leader of the group who claims to be omnipotent and omniscient, has already exclaimed: Hongjun? Hongjun, the legendary Taoist ancestor who combined his body with Taoism? ? !
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Official(14)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is good, but it's not detailed enough. If you want to write it well, try to write it in more detail. For example, Hongjun improved the prehistoric world, changed the world, or local characters in the prehistoric world. You can also write about leading a group of people to increase the world's dimension. If you write about Hongjun pretending to be a ghost, you can write it, but it's not necessary. You need to figure out Hongjun's positioning, buddy.
Generally speaking, it doesn't feel good to always write about group friends. The world of the protagonist and the protagonist can be written about more than a bunch of things.
The title of your book is Hongjun, and the length of it is not as good as Qun Friends. I suggest you ignore Qun Friends and write more about the development of the prehistoric times. In summary, it can kill time and is not a masterpiece.
It looked too awkward to me. It was just a template, and the main character was not well-characterized.
A very ordinary book but very poisonous
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's not enough to read. I plan to gain weight before reading it.
I think it would be interesting to write a chat group novel in which the characters are all like Missile Hongjun, such as Pangu who plays basketball.
It can be very beautiful. Come on, please update more.
The author is under the command of Marshal Tianpeng
It's indeed interesting that Fang Yuan traveled through time and became Xiao Yan, but what's the point of writing a plot about breaking off an engagement and not finishing it after nine chapters? It just happened to be stuck on the shelf, 66666666.
This book is really good. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.
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Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is good, but it's not detailed enough. If you want to write it well, try to write it in more detail. For example, Hongjun improved the prehistoric world, changed the world, or local characters in the prehistoric world. You can also write about leading a group of people to increase the world's dimension. If you write about Hongjun pretending to be a ghost, you can write it, but it's not necessary. You need to figure out Hongjun's positioning, buddy.
Generally speaking, it doesn't feel good to always write about group friends. The world of the protagonist and the protagonist can be written about more than a bunch of things.
The title of your book is Hongjun, and the length of it is not as good as Qun Friends. I suggest you ignore Qun Friends and write more about the development of the prehistoric times. In summary, it can kill time and is not a masterpiece.
It looked too awkward to me. It was just a template, and the main character was not well-characterized.
A very ordinary book but very poisonous
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's not enough to read. I plan to gain weight before reading it.
I think it would be interesting to write a chat group novel in which the characters are all like Missile Hongjun, such as Pangu who plays basketball.
It can be very beautiful. Come on, please update more.
The author is under the command of Marshal Tianpeng
It's indeed interesting that Fang Yuan traveled through time and became Xiao Yan, but what's the point of writing a plot about breaking off an engagement and not finishing it after nine chapters? It just happened to be stuck on the shelf, 66666666.
This book is really good. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.
Good-looking,,,,,,,,,, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
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