Old Timer

Just one question, is there a female protagonist? As long as there is no heroine, we are good friends. Jpg😃😃😃😃

I think the writing was pretty good at the beginning, but later I felt it changed a little bit. That is to say, there are a lot of driving plots in the article that want to liven up the atmosphere and be funny. In fact, occasionally some of them can still be effective, but if you write too much, the article will become It's very unlikable. It makes the protagonist seem carefree, and the relationships between the characters seem a bit ambiguous. In other words, the painting style of this book begins to become a bit disharmonious, which makes it a bit uncomfortable for me. Moreover, there are more and more women around the protagonist, which makes it difficult to read. There are only a few men who have appeared, and the description of women also makes it appear that the author does not understand women very well (it is too cartoonish), so I think the author still needs to say that this article is about singles, harems, studs or single female protagonists. I think this will be more convenient for many readers. , Instead of feeling like I liked this article very much, but when I was halfway through it, I suddenly realized that this was not the article I wanted to see, so I gave up the article. Of course, I just hope that I won't waste time and energy because of a little mistake in it, and be full of regrets. I'm done, thank you. Thank you also for being patient and reading my opinions (*°∀°)=3

Well written, good luck to the author! 👍👍👍

It looks good, good, good, come on

I think we should write more plots about the protagonist's battles. After all, the protagonist never seems to defeat the enemy alone (beating the player does not count). Also, high-level strong men appear too early. The people the protagonist meets will definitely become stronger and stronger in the future. How to write about angel-level people after meeting them so early?

The author writes well, keep up the good work!

It's well written, but I can't read it. It's not suitable for me.

Someone (that is, the one called Young Life-Destroying One) mentioned this phenomenon in the best friend's book review area-ncf said that this book's Tarot cards and other cx best friends. I feel that the beginning of this book is somewhat similar, but it does not constitute cx and can be regarded as a reference. The meaning of cx: refers to the act of stealing or modifying other people's works as one's own, completely or partially copying other people's works or changing their form or content to a certain extent in the same way of use. (From Baidu) (Look at the picture) If some NCF people still think it is CX after reading it, please be sure to provide evidence, such as going to a website or something to identify it. Claiming that a work is a work is plagiarism and disrespectful to the author of the book.

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If God had not given birth to me as a keyboard warrior, my spouting would be as long as the night! You can fight three thousand miles in one person, and you can stop a million divisions with one click! The key to the river comes from the sky, and with one click, it controls the world! Fight three thousand emperors with just one word, and conquer fourteen continents with two keys! The key energy stretches across 30,000 miles, and the light reaches nineteen continents with just one click! I have a key to open the Heavenly Gate, and I have a key to kill the immortal! Break the world of mortals! Kill all the immortals! With one click in your hand, cut off the nine heavens! If there is no true immortal in the world, I would like to hold the key and become an immortal! Thousands of tribulations, hundreds of difficulties, eternity, in a blink of an eye! The immortal body and the immortal soul shake the past and shine through the present. When the yin and yang are reversed, I will hold the clear sky with my magic key! Here comes the sword! (Cross out, cross out, cross out) Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Although in reality, I am as humble as an ant, swallowing my anger and being submissive. I dare not insult others at will for fear of getting into trouble and being beaten. But on the Internet, I am high-spirited and self-reliant. I can kill the sky with my keys, look down on the world, give guidance to the country, hit netizens hard, insult them, spit out sweet things, and feel extremely happy! The world above the head recognizes the title of International Commentary Master of Three Hundred and Sixty Lines! Hold the innate twenty-six keys and the nine palaces handwritten voice input method! It can be said that the rise and fall of generations! You can decide right and wrong! Anyone who disobeys me will become a dog! If the sky goes against me, I will usurp it! As Emperor Jian, I shall suppress all enemies in the world! The key path is profound, and its origin refers to the great road. In ancient times, there were key people who walked in the market and when they encountered injustice, they should use the key to attack it. There is also a key person who condenses the sword in his mind, gathers it into a key soul, controls Qing Ming, and raises his hand to key Qi across 80,000 miles. Later, there was the Key Saint, who combined the human bond into one and turned into the Key Person. The bond domain was initially formed, the key energy protected the body, both offense and defense were able to operate smoothly. The supreme key god, comprehends the key path, moves his hands and feet, and shocks all worlds. With one click, the heavens will be shattered. When I was drunk, I turned on the light and looked at the keys. I dreamed about the horn-blowing camp. I have a key heart that shines across mountains and rivers thousands of miles away! The top of immortality! Proud of the world! With my keyboard, everything will be better! If God had not given birth to me as a keyboard warrior, my spouting would be as long as the night! You can fight three thousand miles in one person, and you can stop a million divisions with one click! The key to the river comes from the sky, and with one click, it controls the world! Fight three thousand emperors with just one word, and conquer fourteen continents with two keys! The key energy stretches across 30,000 miles, and the light reaches nineteen continents with just one click! I have a key to open the Heavenly Gate, and I have a key to kill the immortal! Break the world of mortals! Kill all the immortals! With one click in your hand, cut off the nine heavens! If there is no true immortal in the world, I would like to hold the key and become an immortal! Thousands of tribulations, hundreds of difficulties, eternity, in a blink of an eye! The immortal body and the immortal soul shake the past and shine through the present. When the yin and yang are reversed, I will hold the clear sky with my magic key! Here comes the sword! (Cross out, cross out, cross out) Come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The women the author describes are too emmmmm, they can be changed...