
The Heavens Are in Reverse
by Seedlings In Swaddling Clothes
About This Novel
Yang Yi traveled through the heavens and began to understand the national martial arts from dragon and snake. The journey of using Yuan Qi has begun. What is the magical secret of Yuan Qi? Creation of the void? Or is it becoming reality? Resurrection of spiritual energy? World jump? Teleportation across all realms? Until one day. He discovered that this was all in childhood. "Fellow Taoists, you and I have the essence!"
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Official(7)Scraped 4d ago
Emotional scenes are too embarrassing. Don't write about emotions. You can't express the desired emotion at all. The more you watch it, the more embarrassing it becomes.
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What are you writing about? Full of flaws
Don't know what to write?
To be honest, the structure of this book is okay, but the author's writing style is too bad, and the writing is messy. It feels like a primary school student writing an essay. He writes whatever comes to his mind. There is no logic behind it. It doesn't read smoothly at all. It takes so much brain cells to read your novel. I have to figure out the logic by myself.
Xiao Chao earlier, in Chapter 112, he was also called Brother Chao. It was fine before, but when I arrived at Dragon Snake, I felt particularly embarrassed.
Why do you have to be fifteen to time travel? I don't understand.
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Wise stuff,,,,,,,,
Wise stuff,,,,,,,,
Weird
The plot in chapters 16 to 23 is inexplicable and has many flaws.
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Official(7)Scraped 4d ago
Emotional scenes are too embarrassing. Don't write about emotions. You can't express the desired emotion at all. The more you watch it, the more embarrassing it becomes.
Good reviews
What are you writing about? Full of flaws
Don't know what to write?
To be honest, the structure of this book is okay, but the author's writing style is too bad, and the writing is messy. It feels like a primary school student writing an essay. He writes whatever comes to his mind. There is no logic behind it. It doesn't read smoothly at all. It takes so much brain cells to read your novel. I have to figure out the logic by myself.
Xiao Chao earlier, in Chapter 112, he was also called Brother Chao. It was fine before, but when I arrived at Dragon Snake, I felt particularly embarrassed.
Why do you have to be fifteen to time travel? I don't understand.
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wise stuff,,,,,,,,
Wise stuff,,,,,,,,
Weird
The plot in chapters 16 to 23 is inexplicable and has many flaws.









