
Simple Game Live Room
About This Novel
A live broadcast room suddenly appeared, and the content of the live broadcast turned out to be a classic that I had heard before, a mini game that I had played? Hide and seek, genesis, city tracking, grid jumping... With life as the bet and human desire to attract, every live broadcast will subvert the previous live broadcast content. "This is a live broadcast room that will keep you addicted!" Said a person wearing a clown mask.
What Readers Think
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Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
There are some flaws, overall good, but the author is a bit abusive🤗
Actually, I don't understand a bit. Fernando is already equivalent to being more powerful than a god, so
A small earth or a small country cannot be destroyed? Can't start the live broadcast? Will it be restricted? This is too watery, a bit speechless
This male protagonist is zz
Holy Mother, if someone shoots you, you save others? ? ? Awesome! ! I would like to call you a pure love warrior. Abandoned all the fire tmd
Found a huge author mistake
At the beginning of Ludo, it was said that each camp had 1,000 people and the total number was 4,000 or 4,000 (the first picture), but later it was said that each camp had 4,000 people (the second picture). This must be a mistake! (One star less for this big mistake)
It's not that your writing is not good
It's not that your writing is not good, or that the logic is bad, but it involves the country, which makes people feel boring and weak, and there are too many chapters in one game. Although it is not a short story, the plot is really boring, and it is far less exciting than the first game.
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Not bad, this novel is still good
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Too wordy
The subject matter is interesting, but the author's writing skills are not good enough, and such a good idea was wasted. Every time the game is too long, and most of it is a running account record, the layout of the plot is very rigid, and it is very pale when the ending is revealed. There is a lot of foreshadowing, and it seems very long-winded. It might be better if the game is limited to about 70 chapters. The realistic part is too blunt.
800 punch in
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Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 11d ago
There are some flaws, overall good, but the author is a bit abusive🤗
Actually, I don't understand a bit. Fernando is already equivalent to being more powerful than a god, so
A small earth or a small country cannot be destroyed? Can't start the live broadcast? Will it be restricted? This is too watery, a bit speechless
This male protagonist is zz
Holy Mother, if someone shoots you, you save others? ? ? Awesome! ! I would like to call you a pure love warrior. Abandoned all the fire tmd
Found a huge author mistake
At the beginning of Ludo, it was said that each camp had 1,000 people and the total number was 4,000 or 4,000 (the first picture), but later it was said that each camp had 4,000 people (the second picture). This must be a mistake! (One star less for this big mistake)
It's not that your writing is not good
It's not that your writing is not good, or that the logic is bad, but it involves the country, which makes people feel boring and weak, and there are too many chapters in one game. Although it is not a short story, the plot is really boring, and it is far less exciting than the first game.
.
Not bad, this novel is still good
. . . . .
Too wordy
The subject matter is interesting, but the author's writing skills are not good enough, and such a good idea was wasted. Every time the game is too long, and most of it is a running account record, the layout of the plot is very rigid, and it is very pale when the ending is revealed. There is a lot of foreshadowing, and it seems very long-winded. It might be better if the game is limited to about 70 chapters. The realistic part is too blunt.
800 punch in
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