The Steel Ship Island of Great Navigation

Emmm, due to the impact of the epidemic, I have been reading two to three thousand hours a week, and my reading speed has been very fast, which has caused me to often read. When I saw this book, I felt that the writing was very innovative. I didn't plan to write a book review, after all, I was lazy, and I saw a review before that said that after seeing a long review (a very formal book review), I didn't want to read this book. But seeing that the results of this book didn't seem to be very good, I thought I'd better contribute my meager effort and write a book review for the author to attract readers. I'll try my best to write down my feelings after reading it. The writing of this book is quite novel. It is not a fan of One Piece, but it draws on the background of Pirates. However, the hierarchy and other aspects are still very good. I feel that it is not easy to write down. As of now, it is about the same level as the East China Sea in One Piece, but it does not feel that the pace is slow. It is not like some novels that start punching the Yonko and stepping on the Shichibukai within a few chapters. It is also not like some novels that forcefully slow down the pace and make it awkward. Read the content in the book and think about the author here. Anna's prototype is Nami, Ilya (probably this name, I have a bad memory) is based on Robin, and the combination of Big Head and Monkey is Chopper. Then the boatman also looks more like Frankie. The overthrown dynasty probably also borrowed lessons from the Dragon Pirates. You must have guessed right. When you see this, don't think, Oh, that's it. This is the most interesting part of the book. By borrowing the plot characters from One Piece and then changing them, you can see some shadows, but in fact the difference is quite big. Only the character Anna in the book is closer to the original, and the others have their own unique and distinctive characters. Then this book added elements such as fantasy (Western swords and magic), steam machinery, games, etc. (There are also some other elements, but I can't remember them clearly), making this book very different from One Piece. This is also a highlight of this book. (Emmm, if you are still not satisfied after reading the latest chapter of this book and want to read something in this style, you can read Lord of the Abyss. I also like this book) I thought before writing that I would have a lot to write, but when I actually started writing, I couldn't write much. My writing style is still poor. Finally, I would like to ask where the author's main website is, because I heard from other authors that if you give rewards, if you are not reading through QQ, you can only receive 1/4, and there is a 30% handling fee on the Apple side. In addition, the author must not enter the palace. This book has a good prospect, but it has been written in a bit of urgency recently. The level still needs to be carefully considered. Although the protagonist cannot skip levels and fight monsters, he is not a protagonist. However, since that two years later, the level has fallen slightly, but if the author pays attention later, it will not hurt. Attention, be sure not to be a eunuch. Many of the books I have read recently are in the palace. I don't know the author's purpose in writing a book. I still want to write a story to support my family, but before giving up, remember that there are readers like me who are looking forward to the next chapter. Although the current results are not very good (at least according to the data I saw on QQ Reading), the prospects are still very good. Come on, Oli.

This book is very novel and exciting to read. It also draws on pirates, steampunk, etc., But the span in the middle is a bit large. For example, doesn't the serial secret potion need to be digested? The protagonist's contact spans multiple sequences in a short time, which may be the accumulation of the previous two years, but the span is too fast and too large. And when you wrote the magician sequence potion to replace the dragon slaying sequence potion, I was very confused about why you can directly replace different sequences. Is there any follow-up? Then the telekinesis fruit feels like there is nothing particularly outstanding except for the basics. Secondly, in the arena, Sequence 1, 2, and 3 did not feel as good as dogs. A large group suddenly appeared. Some people may think that they came from the Endless Sea, but there were too many. We haven't even reached the Endless Sea. There are so many of them. Sequence 0 is everywhere. Sequence 1 and 2 are really not as good as dogs. The Sea Emperor of the Endless Sea just has a special sequence. I hope the author will read it carefully here. Of course, it is just for reference. I hope it can give you some other ideas. Also, this book is really good.

One Piece is basically a game played by men. After reading so many chapters, it seems that women are all women. Author, you should write erotic novels.

Big Voyage, I didn't expect it to be a One Piece fanfic at first, I've never seen anything like this before, it's really good

The subject matter is very good, and the escape from the ship at the beginning is also very good. When we entered the slum, we started to blow up the loan shark gang. It was very vicious. The concept was to develop as a dog and pretend to be cool. I didn't say anything, but the relationship with those girls was directly unbearable to me. The part about trying to persuade him to quit (Arthur proposed to a girl who had a relationship with a pig's foot, and the protagonist refused on the girl's behalf) I didn't understand. 1. The girl is from a noble family and hesitates when someone proposes to her. How is that possible? How could a girl from a noble family not refuse, given the courage of such a noble family? I hesitate, can I understand that she still likes Arthur a little bit? 2. Since Pig's Knuckle helped her refuse, then I don't have the guts as a girl, but what about the courage of the male protagonist? If she dares to refuse, then why did the male protagonist refuse the duel? Thinking about it from another angle, in the presence of the male protagonist, she agreed to the male partner's proposal. Is this kind of girl worth it? And since she wants to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, she shouldn't come forward. After all, if she is the real female protagonist, the male protagonist does not even have this confidence in the girl? 3. I didn't say anything about the harem story, after all, I saw it later 4. Personal opinions, rational questions, don't comment if you don't like it.

How can I put it best? I have some ideas and writing skills, but the plot arrangement is too **, especially after saving Mark's father. It reminded me of the novels from 10 years ago, with abrupt twists and forced wisdom. Since you are not ready to break your face, then just do your current role, but in the end you did a lot of **** things. This is too poisonous, and it is impossible for an old bookworm to chew it┐(─__─)┌

Can we be less pretentious and slap in the face? When you look at it like this, it really feels like a third-rate novel, and the protagonist feels very **

I originally thought it was a pirate fanfic, but when I went in I found that I couldn't understand it at all. I didn't even know if it was about a game or a fanfic.

Come on, author, other pirate novels are much better. This pirate novel has the same story without losing the pirate style. The author is a great author. I support it.

① Star is because the author worked hard to write the book, and ① Star is because I felt speechless when I saw him pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. The consequence of pretending to be a pig is that he will never be able to eat a tiger again, because it becomes a habit.