The Steel Ship Island of Great Navigation

Emmm, due to the impact of the epidemic, I have been reading two to three thousand hours a week, and my reading speed has been very fast, which has caused me to often read. When I saw this book, I felt that the writing was very innovative. I didn't plan to write a book review, after all, I was lazy, and I saw a review before that said that after seeing a long review (a very formal book review), I didn't want to read this book. But seeing that the results of this book didn't seem to be very good, I thought I'd better contribute my meager effort and write a book review for the author to attract readers. I'll try my best to write down my feelings after reading it. The writing of this book is quite novel. It is not a fan of One Piece, but it draws on the background of Pirates. However, the hierarchy and other aspects are still very good. I feel that it is not easy to write down. As of now, it is about the same level as the East China Sea in One Piece, but it does not feel that the pace is slow. It is not like some novels that start punching the Yonko and stepping on the Shichibukai within a few chapters. It is also not like some novels that forcefully slow down the pace and make it awkward. Read the content in the book and think about the author here. Anna's prototype is Nami, Ilya (probably this name, I have a bad memory) is based on Robin, and the combination of Big Head and Monkey is Chopper. Then the boatman also looks more like Frankie. The overthrown dynasty probably also borrowed lessons from the Dragon Pirates. You must have guessed right. When you see this, don't think, Oh, that's it. This is the most interesting part of the book. By borrowing the plot characters from One Piece and then changing them, you can see some shadows, but in fact the difference is quite big. Only the character Anna in the book is closer to the original, and the others have their own unique and distinctive characters. Then this book added elements such as fantasy (Western swords and magic), steam machinery, games, etc. (There are also some other elements, but I can't remember them clearly), making this book very different from One Piece. This is also a highlight of this book. (Emmm, if you are still not satisfied after reading the latest chapter of this book and want to read something in this style, you can read Lord of the Abyss. I also like this book) I thought before writing that I would have a lot to write, but when I actually started writing, I couldn't write much. My writing style is still poor. Finally, I would like to ask where the author's main website is, because I heard from other authors that if you give rewards, if you are not reading through QQ, you can only receive 1/4, and there is a 30% handling fee on the Apple side. In addition, the author must not enter the palace. This book has a good prospect, but it has been written in a bit of urgency recently. The level still needs to be carefully considered. Although the protagonist cannot skip levels and fight monsters, he is not a protagonist. However, since that two years later, the level has fallen slightly, but if the author pays attention later, it will not hurt. Attention, be sure not to be a eunuch. Many of the books I have read recently are in the palace. I don't know the author's purpose in writing a book. I still want to write a story to support my family, but before giving up, remember that there are readers like me who are looking forward to the next chapter. Although the current results are not very good (at least according to the data I saw on QQ Reading), the prospects are still very good. Come on, Oli.

This book is very novel and exciting to read. It also draws on pirates, steampunk, etc., But the span in the middle is a bit large. For example, doesn't the serial secret potion need to be digested? The protagonist's contact spans multiple sequences in a short time, which may be the accumulation of the previous two years, but the span is too fast and too large. And when you wrote the magician sequence potion to replace the dragon slaying sequence potion, I was very confused about why you can directly replace different sequences. Is there any follow-up? Then the telekinesis fruit feels like there is nothing particularly outstanding except for the basics. Secondly, in the arena, Sequence 1, 2, and 3 did not feel as good as dogs. A large group suddenly appeared. Some people may think that they came from the Endless Sea, but there were too many. We haven't even reached the Endless Sea. There are so many of them. Sequence 0 is everywhere. Sequence 1 and 2 are really not as good as dogs. The Sea Emperor of the Endless Sea just has a special sequence. I hope the author will read it carefully here. Of course, it is just for reference. I hope it can give you some other ideas. Also, this book is really good.

One Piece is basically a game played by men. After reading so many chapters, it seems that women are all women. Author, you should write erotic novels.

Big Voyage, I didn't expect it to be a One Piece fanfic at first, I've never seen anything like this before, it's really good

The subject matter is very good, and the escape from the ship at the beginning is also very good. When we entered the slum, we started to blow up the loan shark gang. It was very vicious. The concept was to develop as a dog and pretend to be cool. I didn't say anything, but the relationship with those girls was directly unbearable to me. The part about trying to persuade him to quit (Arthur proposed to a girl who had a relationship with a pig's foot, and the protagonist refused on the girl's behalf) I didn't understand. 1. The girl is from a noble family and hesitates when someone proposes to her. How is that possible? How could a girl from a noble family not refuse, given the courage of such a noble family? I hesitate, can I understand that she still likes Arthur a little bit? 2. Since Pig's Knuckle helped her refuse, then I don't have the guts as a girl, but what about the courage of the male protagonist? If she dares to refuse, then why did the male protagonist refuse the duel? Thinking about it from another angle, in the presence of the male protagonist, she agreed to the male partner's proposal. Is this kind of girl worth it? And since she wants to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, she shouldn't come forward. After all, if she is the real female protagonist, the male protagonist does not even have this confidence in the girl? 3. I didn't say anything about the harem story, after all, I saw it later 4. Personal opinions, rational questions, don't comment if you don't like it.

How can I put it best? I have some ideas and writing skills, but the plot arrangement is too **, especially after saving Mark's father. It reminded me of the novels from 10 years ago, with abrupt twists and forced wisdom. Since you are not ready to break your face, then just do your current role, but in the end you did a lot of **** things. This is too poisonous, and it is impossible for an old bookworm to chew it┐(─__─)┌

Can we be less pretentious and slap in the face? When you look at it like this, it really feels like a third-rate novel, and the protagonist feels very **

I originally thought it was a pirate fanfic, but when I went in I found that I couldn't understand it at all. I didn't even know if it was about a game or a fanfic.

First let's talk about the worldview. The world structure of this book is very large and complex. There are pirates, potions, sequences, 12 sages and so on. It is still an online game (the game is not a game, not a fan.). If you are not a big writer in the Internet or have been imagining it for a long time, it will be difficult to hold on. It is very likely that you will go astray while writing, focus on one thing and miss the other, or you will write one thing and forget the other. Or just rambling here and there. For a large structure like this, if there is no detailed outline and you think about it now and then, it is easy for the writing to be distorted, or to be high in one aspect. Can't get out. In the end, the foreshadowing is not completed, and the appendix may collapse. If the author is a newbie, this setting will be very difficult to get started. Secondly, let's talk about the story. This book has always given me a feeling like the original One Piece. 1. The character of the protagonist (sense of justice, heavy on commitment, sometimes brainless, caring about friends). I think that in a novel with this setting, the character of the protagonist is more cold, rational, heroic, and egoistic. (Why? Because in this very big world, if the protagonist wants to stand on top of the world, it is not enough to rely on the game system. At this time, it is necessary to give the protagonist some chance and coincidence, that is, the protagonist's aura. But! The protagonist's aura is something like this. Don't use it too often. If it is too much, it will give people a very awkward feeling. Every time in adversity Or in the ending where the protagonist is destined to die, there will be some incomprehensible and unreasonable coincidences that help the protagonist to save the day, but rarely rely on the protagonist's own strength. Therefore, if the protagonist's character is too positive, the difficulty will be greatly increased, and it will be more necessary to give people the impression that even a pig will do it.) 2. Character setting, this is one of the hardest things for me to accept. Navigator (almost exactly the same as the original work. They are all good-looking and sexy young women. Their "hometown" is occupied by a very powerful enemy. Super proficient in navigation knowledge. Money obsessed. Let the protagonist help and complete the revenge. (I really don't understand. The protagonist paid such a high price for a Navigator. Logically speaking, the two have no direct relationship. At that time, the vampire boss When you asked him to choose the prize, he said that it would be too tiring for him to carry out the revenge plan alone? ? Really, if the protagonist's aura is not too big, he will not be able to find all the crew members even if they die ten times? Boatman (like the original work, he is also a modified person, with very high skills, and his appearance is inexplicable. It is confusing. First of all, after knowing the protagonist, he found the protagonist's divination by coincidence, and then the thing he asked the protagonist to find happened to be in the protagonist's hand. This is not over yet. Like the protagonist, he is hostile to the world government.???[Emot=default,33/]) Doctor (I was confused when I got on the boat. First, he saved the protagonist once. Then he talked with the protagonist about his life ideals for two years. Then he followed the protagonist wholeheartedly. [Emot=default,33/]) 3. The story line, first of all, is the relationship with the little princess. At the beginning, it was just to gain favor. What then? Then I think the princess has maxed out the protagonist's favorability. ? ? ? It seems that the protagonist has always been paying for the princess. The princess does not actually help the protagonist. This is not over yet. The protagonist is getting better and better with the princess, and their relationship is getting closer and closer. Especially the part where they were trying to escape. I always thought that the protagonist would go find his adoptive father, Old Quark, and escape. Unexpectedly, he just helped the princess run away. [Emot=default,33/] His adoptive father, Old Quark, is the one who always helps the protagonist. Dedicate yourself wholeheartedly to the protagonist. And what about the princess? I really don't want to say anything more. In the end, the author made such a big fuss about the princess. I really am. Accepted. . . . . The protagonist is nice to several women around him. Although the good ones are a bit too much. But it's still acceptable. After all, men are human beings. But what? Grinding, grinding, grinding for so long. Hundreds of them have not yet been demolished. [Emot=default,33/]Especially the navigator. Logically speaking, the protagonist took such a big risk to help him complete his revenge plan. It should be pushed down directly after that. But what? Four words to describe it. Advanced 👅************ 4. Power system. This is also one of the problems that books with such a large structure are prone to make. How big is the gap between each sequence? Which is more important, devil fruits or potions, and the level difference in swordsmanship. What is the relationship between sequence levels and orders? If the power system is not understood. It will be very confusing to watch. 6. Introduction. The introduction of this book will give people a feeling of refreshing and invincible writing. However, I just want to ask, basically all books are invincible in the later stages. Such an introduction is meaningless. Instead, some people who like cool and mindless writing will be called in. The resulting content was very inconsistent with the introduction. A backhand is a blackout. 5., Since the people of Endless Sea are so strong. So cruel. Said it before. That kind of sequence five. A being who can dominate one side in the Black Sea is just a sailor in the Endless Sea. Then here comes the problem. Why won't you come back? I'm in the Endless Sea, and I'm probably at Sequence 45 if I'm not doing well. Why don't I run back to the Black Sea? If nothing else, you should have prosperity and wealth in your lifetime. It shouldn't be a problem to be a nobleman. I didn't understand it when I watched One Piece. Since the previous sea area was so weak, why not come back? It might be hard to come back. But if it were me, I would definitely try my best to get to the Black Sea. Overall it's okay. It's more poisonous, but it's not unbearable. Although the world view is too big! But it can barely be considered a novel subject matter. Please support me

Come on, author, other pirate novels are much better. This pirate novel has the same story without losing the pirate style. The author is a great author. I support it.