Beiliang Proton

Recommended by the author. After reading Chapter 9, there is not much progress in the plot, but the writing is good and I like the setting. I hope the author can keep writing and at least complete one update a day. Too many coincidences, Holy Mother. Chapter 50 Comments

[New in 20190622] ㅤㅤThe title of the book is quite satisfactory but it makes people feel itchy--the hissing of protons is so exciting and thrilling every step of the way. The introduction is even more interesting, if you don't believe me, click on it~ ㅤㅤThe setting of traveling through an ancient fictional world, being displeased by one's mother and father, and being a dandy son is a cliché. It is even more common to travel through the time when the marriage is about to be made (crossed out) to make a proton. ㅤㅤ However, it is quite strange that the youngest son of the king from another world is a proton, which is a foreshadowing. Then the behavior of King Wuling and the way the protagonist treats people and things are also somewhat new. The writing method is also very novel, please see later. ㅤㅤThree views are acceptable, but still a few points behind. How much tolerance, so I don't feel aggrieved. Even though he was acting like a playboy, Hongdoufang's dispersion of fifty thousand taels of silver was a bit excessive. Although the protagonist died only after the original owner died, it is still unpleasant to treat the person who put the original owner to death. Truth or Dare tests Hong Xiuer's skills, and it is a mistake to boldly test yourself in the sumo ring. ㅤㅤ Treat Hongxiuer with a joking attitude, and be as wise as a fool to protect himself. ㅤㅤ He was able to see through traps and ambush on the road, he was able to catch the young boy even when he caught a hidden buckle, and he was calm and controlled when he answered Chen's father. This is worthy of a round of applause. ㅤㅤThe plot unfolds naturally, without any obvious awkwardness. ㅤㅤThe writing is good, with basically no typos or grammatical errors. The foreshadowing is so hidden that no one knows it. Although things are a little strange when they happen, they still make sense. When they are inadvertently pointed out afterwards, people will suddenly realize it, and they will have another understanding after reading the previous text. ㅤㅤThe ups and downs arouse emotional excitement, and the reasons will become apparent after the incident, which is also strange. [Bonus points] ㅤㅤThe existence of baggage is the spice that enhances the flavor of the novel. The main character's verbal longing for Lao Zhou's daughter has become a joke, adding some interesting flavor to the novel. ㅤㅤI don't want to be a licker, and I don't take it for granted. Great wisdom is like foolishness, but hazy and drunken eyes deceive the world. With the Pearl of Wisdom in hand, you can answer your father's questions, and then you will know the true meaning. ㅤㅤ Act decisively. Knowing that Jiulang has evil intentions, he kicked him away. He judged that Hong Xiuer had an extraordinary background and poached him. Huge profits fell, and small tricks were used to save everyone. I also know that being humble, courteous and courteous can be used to protect yourself with treasures. ㅤㅤ slowly unfolds and talks eloquently. The world background structure is very natural and in place. ㅤㅤDon't open up the harem randomly, don't show mercy everywhere. When I poached Hongxiuer from Hongdoufang, I saw that she was not simple, but she had never touched women. [Minus points] ㅤㅤBe more cautious when entering. ㅤㅤThe pace is a little slow. What about the thrilling proton trip in a small wild country that was promised? Chapter 28 is still in Wuzhou. But it's understandable that there's always some way to pave the way. ㅤㅤThere are few book reviews and chapter reviews, and the atmosphere is not lively. "I have a habit of saying something that makes me unhappy, but when I do, there is no one to talk to." This feeling is not very comfortable. ㅤㅤ Even though the sap killed the original owner and allowed the protagonist to travel through time, the protagonist's oblique and lenient treatment of related people always makes readers from a God's perspective unhappy. PS: I cried out loud, and the review post I wrote for more than an hour at noon was swallowed up but not spit out (ुŏ̥̥̥̥םŏ̥̥̥̥) ु. Rewriting an article takes a lot of time and effort. Praise me all! Highly praised!

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New author? There are currently about six female protagonists, with an imaginary ancient background and frequent updates. P. S. I keep this book as a souvenir. Several years have passed and Orange has not come back. I hope he is still well.