Reignited 2003

There is a reason why this book has low collections and few book readers. Economics and love studies are nonsense when combined. Too much narration information is in low numbers, and more than 800 chapters are not even a year old. The writing style is not bad. If you want to talk about practicing novels, it is not bad. If you want to talk about modern writing, it is a bit long-winded.

I wrote millions of words and it took more than 100 days.

This writing style is really hard to describe. It is both beautiful and unbearable. In short, it looks awkward, but it attracted me to finish reading. I was really speechless

Advantages 1. Professional, the protagonist's career line is substantial, and the content is professional and detailed. 2. Some female protagonists such as Qin Manman and Tang Qianying create vivid images. 3. The content and dialogue are lifelike and smooth. 4. The author promotes the concept of strengthening the country through industry, and the protagonist IT industry strengthens the country and contributes to national development. Insufficient 1. Female protagonist design: The protagonist was almost bitten by a venomous snake in order to save Qin Manman at first. Although the heroine did not push him to the venomous snake, she was more self-protective and introverted, thinking that if the male protagonist died, she would repay the male protagonist's family well. Later, he drugged the male protagonist. It was understandable but not a good impression in a similar situation. 2. Conflicts in individual places. On the one hand, the male protagonist said that Qin Manman's world would be meaningless without her. On the other hand, he said that Tang Qianying was a beam of light that once fell into the abyss. Qin Manman cheated the male protagonist in his previous life and she was not the one who accompanied him when he was in trouble. Personally, I feel that it is inappropriate to write Qin Manman as more meaningful than Tang Qianying. Regarding the treatment of roommates, it is understandable that the high school roommates feed the couple when life is difficult and then repay the favor in life and career. The college roommates isolate the male protagonist and the female protagonist at first, but the male protagonist no longer isolates them after using tricks and actually promises to ensure that they have enough food and clothing. Treating the family and hometown: When the male protagonist was framed by the village cadres from the same village, the family and the village did not do much. The tuition depended on the compensation from the grandfather. The heroine's father, school, and alumni association were relied upon to get rid of the frame. The male protagonist also built a fruit sales and processing network for his hometown and supported various enterprises. For example, Qiangdong repays his hometown. Everyone in Qiangdong repays his hometown by paying for his college education. However, the male protagonist's family and villagers did not realize that they contributed a lot when the male protagonist was framed. You must know that the clan power in rural areas in remote areas is to a certain extent against the village cadres and family members who framed the protagonist. 3. The name Qingyun itself is quite dramatic, and it is understandable that he wants to rely on Fudan Qingyun, but in the middle and later stages of the book, the name Yun Emperor is really dramatic. 4. The protagonist looks down on Internet business and thinks it is easy to kill pigs. Objectively speaking, industrial and agricultural entrepreneurs are indeed more important than Internet entrepreneurs with the same output value, in terms of employment, but it is a bit unobjective to talk about industry without talking about the size of the company. Internet companies worth tens of billions are not so important, but hundreds of billions or trillions are much more important. Furthermore, no matter which one Whichever industry in the industry chooses the wrong team and chooses the wrong option will be hit. The protagonist says that the Internet is easy to be hit. For example, Hangzhou Horse was hit because it challenged the country's financial power. The uncles of the heroine in the book were also almost hit because they challenged the monopoly of a certain industrial system. It can be seen that although the industry is important, the choice of team is more important.

It's 2025. When the author wrote this book, did he ever think about it? Now that we have sixth-generation mobile phones, we have really begun to show our strength.

To be honest, I think the first half is okay, especially the description of the high school stage is very good, but in the second part, something is different from the male protagonist club established in the first half. Damn, what's going on with Zhang Nan, he was taken away just for doing a favor? He also said that the world where the male protagonist is reborn is meaningless without Qin Binjun. To be honest, it didn't show that at all later. No matter how good the writing is in the front, it's just as bad as the writing in the back. If you don't like reading stallion stories, you can read the first half and it's really good.

The writing is okay, but doesn't the author feel that the timeline is too slow? It seems like half a year has not passed since I saw more than 300 chapters.

Some of the contents in it are deeply touching, these authors. Also, I admire that there are so many kids around

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Dear author, if your novel is made into a TV series, will it be a forty-minute episode, of which twenty minutes will require narration? We are here to look at the plot and the story, not to teach you about life, entrepreneurship, management, and history. Well, writing a little is enough. Isn't the word count for such a long paragraph inappropriate?