Fantasy: My Disciple Has the Appearance of Becoming an Immortal
About This Novel
Lin Fan has been practicing at Jianlai Peak for three hundred years, and his cultivation has reached the 6666th level of the Qi Refining Stage. The system released new tasks, and Lin Fan began to recruit disciples. Lin Fan: "I'm only in the Qi refining period. I really don't know how to teach my disciples. Just teach me casually." Decades later, Lin Fan's disciples became stronger and stronger. The eldest disciple was a peerless swordsman, the second disciple became the empress, the third disciple, the fourth disciple... All of them became immortals! Lin Fan: "I give you guidance casually, and all of my disciples become immortals?" The eldest disciple Jian Nantian: "Master has great supernatural powers and strength, and he has shown me the kindness to rebuild!" Second disciple Yue Lingshuang: "Master My cultivation is as good as ever, and even though I have become an emperor, I am no match for the master."... Seventh disciple Ling Yuan'er: "Master is really a heavenly being, my master is the most powerful! Master, do you want me to give you a squeeze?"
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Official(23)Scraped 1mo ago
It's not good to have too many female apprentices
Don't always accept female apprentices, as this may feel a bit contradictory. So what do you want others to think about you as a girl? You can tell at a glance that you are a lustful master. [Emot=default,41/]
, much better than the previous similar one
But it is still very powerful. It can be written normally, and it can be a little Versailles, but don't be brainless. A sect will not be destroyed after thousands of years of growth? After many storms, I came up without a brainstem. I asked the immortal over and over again, "It's poisonous. This plane is not weak, but in the end I have no eyesight at all."
There is so much nonsense, I don't even know how many times it has appeared in one paragraph.
Awkward
If you are a beginner in Qi training, what's the use of practicing it for so long?
good health
Good news, good news, but updates are too slow
Very nice, I hope the author will work hard to update it
Start: My Qi training period was at level 6666, but I was still unable to break through the foundation building. Finally, the system issued a task to recruit disciples. I was still stuck in the Qi training period, but I made a breakthrough. Later, after I continued to recruit talented apprentices, and all the apprentices became bosses, I realized that my Qi training period was not simple. It was an unrivaled Qi training period in the world, and I suddenly realized it! That's the story
The subject matter is very novel
The fighting skills in it only call out the name of the martial arts, and there are no special effects in the fighting. You can only defeat the opponent by calling out XX level martial arts.
I also think there is too much nonsense. Is this just to make up the word count?
Anticlimactic. The later period is nonsense.
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 1mo ago
It's not good to have too many female apprentices
Don't always accept female apprentices, as this may feel a bit contradictory. So what do you want others to think about you as a girl? You can tell at a glance that you are a lustful master. [Emot=default,41/]
, much better than the previous similar one
But it is still very powerful. It can be written normally, and it can be a little Versailles, but don't be brainless. A sect will not be destroyed after thousands of years of growth? After many storms, I came up without a brainstem. I asked the immortal over and over again, "It's poisonous. This plane is not weak, but in the end I have no eyesight at all."
There is so much nonsense, I don't even know how many times it has appeared in one paragraph.
Awkward
If you are a beginner in Qi training, what's the use of practicing it for so long?
good health
Good news, good news, but updates are too slow
Very nice, I hope the author will work hard to update it
Start: My Qi training period was at level 6666, but I was still unable to break through the foundation building. Finally, the system issued a task to recruit disciples. I was still stuck in the Qi training period, but I made a breakthrough. Later, after I continued to recruit talented apprentices, and all the apprentices became bosses, I realized that my Qi training period was not simple. It was an unrivaled Qi training period in the world, and I suddenly realized it! That's the story
The subject matter is very novel
The fighting skills in it only call out the name of the martial arts, and there are no special effects in the fighting. You can only defeat the opponent by calling out XX level martial arts.
I also think there is too much nonsense. Is this just to make up the word count?
Anticlimactic. The later period is nonsense.
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