The Mirror Path of All Heavens

Question 1. Too many words, too many repetitions, too many meaningless descriptions, too many behavioral descriptions and introductions 2. Objectively evaluate the protagonist's IQ, or that there is indeed a problem with his thinking. 3 Time travel is too slow. You don't travel until chapter 6. What do you think? There are too many readers lost, and the plot is too long and too slow. The first problem is that it takes up too many words. I saw the first time I traveled through the world and commented on it. 1 In Xuanxing, it is humans versus alien life forms, that is, humans versus aliens. Then after time travel, the human race was in civil strife, resulting in low empathy. 2. The grassland people written about are no longer human beings, nor are they a foreign race. They are not at all inhumane and are not meaningless massacres. Do you want to create ethnic antagonism? 3 Objectively speaking, the policies contained therein are indeed unrealistic. The ratio of people is too large, and so is the geographical area. Less than one billion versus ninety billion. There are various issues such as funding, environment, and culture. They are too idealistic or based on imagination. What do you think when you cut off the two thumbs of billions of people one by one? Various problems, as well as ideological education. I am afraid that this queen is not a political novice. I am afraid that she will be too rich after the war.

One look at the introduction and you can tell that the author is drawing on "Da Dao Ji" and "Projection of the Heavens"

It's so long-winded that I can't stand it any longer. It just slipped away. If the author doesn't have Gouzi's writing style and imagination, don't imitate it. It's better to write a fanfic.

Why do you write so many supporting characters? There are so many Gu Feng and Gu Feng at the beginning. Search the full text and Goba will appear many times later. Who is watching this kind of secret flow behind the scenes? In reality, readers are all ordinary people, and they have no chance to show off in this life. When reading novels, they actually like this kind of stand-in novel. The protagonist is just like the light, and there is no sense of satisfaction at all. I have what I like to watch all my life.

Eunuch, he said he is not an eunuch, but it has not been updated for so long.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I feel a bit watered down, and some things that are obviously not important keep being long-winded.

Friends, come and take a look!

One billion people manage 90 billion people ? ? ? I have a cerebral infarction . If nothing else, there are tens of billions of people in each state. How can you not go into the mountains and hide? Do you know how chaotic it is? Practitioners can't control it. At best, they can only control it in big cities. The first, second, and third lines can be managed, but what about line 456,789? Think about it, there are nine dynasties in Kyushu, and each dynasty has a population of tens of billions. How big is the place that can support tens of billions of people? The earth is so big, there are still nine earths. Two billion people manage nine earths, which is awesome, and the grasslands are not included. It must be a small place that can defeat nine dynasties. If you don't obey, you will be killed? Do you have enough manpower to kill this and this?

It's so watery, no wonder I stopped reading it after reading it before it was released.

Update, update, don't be like a dog, don't be a dog.