Invincible Heroic Undead God

To be honest, the degree of certainty around 300 is pretty good. I don't even understand why the book's score is so low. But later, you fell into a misunderstanding. We are here to read the story. You said that you analyzed the situation for 10 consecutive chapters without a single dialogue. You analyze before meeting someone, analyze after meeting, and analyze after meeting. I understand that you want to explain things thoroughly, but there is no need. Haven't you heard a thousand allusions to Hamlet? You don't need to analyze this, or you should analyze it less. Just click on the complicated parts. Other times, through the dialogue and behavior of the characters, everyone will figure it out. If you insist on letting people follow your ideas, then what's the point? After all, everyone is different. So if you keep analyzing, you keep repeating. The slow pace relies on the description of the environment, characters, stories, and behaviors, and you are analyzing. I want to read the story, not the story notes, I just want to read the story. You know, for the first time in so many years, I hope for a book called The Eunuch. Nothing else, I really like the concept, but I really hate the storyteller.

A memory was written for three or four chapters, and I recalled it over and over again. I almost vomited while reading it. I entered a portal and wrote a whole chapter, and it was all about the protagonist's discovery and insights. Are you going to build a portal in reality? A portal has cost you two chapters, can you do more? I have been talking about it for about 700 chapters. Two people can talk about each other for a chapter just by looking at each other. I really have nothing to say. A job change can make you talk for two or three chapters over and over again. You might as well go make a TV series. TV stations need talents like you.

Half of the volume is in various forced explanations about the word count of water. The author of Water God, I have never seen such a long-winded book.

I didn't feel it at first. Later, as I read, I discovered that the more I read, the more watery it became. The pace drags on slower. Later, when I saw Rowling's zz behavior, I felt very boring. Although the protagonist is not the Virgin. But his sister is really. . . . And it's not too refreshing.

A battle is written in about 20 chapters, and one thing is repeated for more than ten chapters. It's not that I have never read Shui's novels, but this is the first time I've seen Shui like this.

I'm going to read it, so I checked the comment section first. Forget it, it's not good to curse people.

There was nothing good that I wanted to find before!

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What should I write after Chapter 300? There is so much nonsense and it's so messy.

The pace is slow and there is nothing**