Douluo: at the Beginning, He Was Picked up by Bibi Dong and Brought Back to the Spirit Hall!

Bibi Dong is a love brain in the true sense. Don't compare her with Wang Baochuan. That is insulting Wang Baochuan. Wang Baochuan saw Xue Pinggui transforming into a dragon in his dream, and then he looked noble, so he insisted on marrying Xue Pinggui. And that should be a fictional history, basically just do All the dreams came true later, and Yu Xiaogang, a good golden holy dragon, turned into a pig because he was a waste. Qianxunji worked hard and spent the entire Wuhun Palace's power to train you Bibi Dong, but the result is that you have to elope with a waste. If you are simply a He is nothing more than a waste, but he is still a waste of the hostile forces. Qianxunji has no shortage of women. He is handsome despite his appearance, but he is good-looking anyway. In terms of strength, power, and background, he can't find any woman. If you don't have that kind of talent, Bibi Dong, you probably won't be taken seriously by others. , Food, clothing, training resources, everything is from Wuhun Palace, and in the end, you have to fight inside and outside, even if you are Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Huo Wu, Shui Bing'er, which one is not better than him, at least they are not as talented as him, but they are not blind. Although Tang San's character is undetermined, his talent is really high.

I just suggest, write it quickly! ╰(‵□′)╯ Of course, what follows is about how after marrying Tang Yuehua, he began to slowly conquer the two empires, the Sun and Moon Empire unified the Douluo Star, and the experience of becoming a god. You can fill in the content by yourself. It's so easy to write. Don't you? If you write, I will really collapse. Well, I became a member just because of this book. My book cannot wait until then. If I wait until you do that, my membership will have expired long ago. I will have to smoke again by then. Do you know how this feels?

My mother asked me to take a scumbag as my teacher, and I still had a relationship with that scumbag. Everyone has their own arrogance. A genius asked a loser to be my teacher. It was not wrong to slap him if he didn't agree. He also wanted to apologize. In the end, he even wanted to kill himself.

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I quite liked it at the beginning. I originally came here to talk about Tang San. The next dozen or so of your articles have nothing to do with Tang San. It's just those women who are blaming you. If you want to write that kind of book, just write that kind of book. Why are you talking about Douluo? I just want to watch those girls' videos on a certain platform. Who can read them? Look at the ideas written by people next door to try to make Tang San more popular. You always want to use those women to seduce people. Isn't it better for people to watch videos or read books alone than this thing? I wrote a pretty good beginning, but it got worse as it went on.

First of all, the protagonist I wrote at the beginning was like that kind of bt playboy stallion. He was like a fool at a few years old and hugged Bibi Dong's thighs when he saw him. When I wrote this description, I always regarded the protagonist as a big teddy, and never thought of him as a human being. As an adult, your words are like that kind of brainless cannon fodder. Really, if you weren't the protagonist, I feel like you wouldn't survive two chapters in the book. Bibi Dong asked you to become a disciple. You really acted like a kid of several years old, and the descriptions were very similar. Then I slapped you and turned you into a black man. I thought you were going to make Bibi Dong regret it and feel guilty all the time. But in the end, the protagonist pretended to be cold and cold like a kid, and then worshiped you. I learned from Qian Daoliu, but a few years later I felt like I had awakened my yandere nature and abused Bibi Dong, and then I felt very happy. There was also Qian Daoliu, I felt that I was just angry with Bibi Dong, and I didn't teach anything in detail. A master just walked me through it, and then I talked about the system. The writing is so big, the rewards are so messy, there are all kinds of novels, and a lot of people haven't read them, but I still try my best to learn them. The feeling of tasks is also very strange. It always feels like you can't write anymore and then you forcefully arrange a task and then forcefully write it down. But as you write, you start to behave like a stallion again. You take one here and another, fifty chapters, and it feels like forty chapters are all just fluff. The plot is not explained clearly. They are all about women. It's not that you are not allowed to write, but at least the plot is clearly written, right? I also read the other book and read it all, but at least the plot is clear, the timeline is clear, and Tang San's opportunity is also closed. Isn't it that everyone who writes about Douluo fellows is just to cheat Tang San and steal opportunities, which disgusts Tang San? In the past fifty chapters, I have only seen hydrology, nonsense, recruiting women, and brainless yanderes. There is no plot at all, and you still write such a big system.

Author: I read your last book, Beginning Contract Bibi Dong came here. You should know me. I know it's a new book for the third time, so I can't finish it. I just hope that your book won't be about eunuchs. The subject matter is very novel. I liked your last book very much and I also liked it. It's just your last book. If you have time, please update it. Finally, do your best, author.

How should I put it? The protagonist is not a human being. Of course, the author did not write him as a human being. The plot is just rubbish. As for Bibi Dong's words, the protagonist should not be taken back to raise him. I remember there is a saying that if you are born but not nourished, your fingers will be cut off. If you are born and raised, your head will be repaid. If you are born and raised, there will be no repayment. So, author, what do you think Bibi Dong owes the protagonist, because the protagonist broke up with Bibi Dong with just a slap? To give Bibi Dong shame and make her regret? Is this the protagonist worthy? He also signed a master-servant contract with Bibi Dong. Is this still a love relationship? That's why the author didn't write the protagonist as a human being. Even if he is a human being, he is someone who traveled to the island country. With this writing style, hehe, you will live forever.

I want to see filial piety turn into the Pope's yandere

The front is fine, but the back is terrible. I don't like a scheming harem! , The author couldn't write well, so I copied the previous one and wrote it myself later. It's really bad. Why is he so sinister? The more he does it, the more he looks like a villain.