I, Who Traveled Through Time, Became the National Destiny of the Qin Dynasty

Isn't the totem of the Qin people a black bird? How did you become a dragon? Don't you know how to check historical information when writing a book?

Is it better to have a dragon with a surname, Chen, Yuan Chen, or Feng Zhou? You are the luck dragon of Qin, so you should also be surnamed Qin. This Chen is a drama. Personally, I feel that it should not have a surname, or it would be better if heaven and earth gave it a name. There is no need to have a surname. A dragon is still a common person's idea, and he wants to live forever... Feng Zhou only lived for 800 years, and the second chapter cannot be connected with the third chapter. It seems that a chapter is broken in the middle. Cheng Jiao is older than Ying Zheng, and they have the same father and mother! Cheng Jiao grew up in the capital, and Ying Zheng grew up in Handan.

Either Zhao Ji is written to death in the early stage, or the protagonist sleeps with Zhao Ji! Don't let Zhao Ji insult Qin Shihuang like a baby, thank you, watching Da Qin Fu made me so angry.

So much nonsense. . . . . . . . . I don't even know what it means

But in fact, there are no errors in the author's history. See the picture below. The black bird of the Shang Dynasty and the phoenix of the Zhou Dynasty. Qin is the dragon and the black dragon.

There are some "ru", "wo", "mother", etc. In the book mixed with vernacular. Even a mudblood like me can't understand these things, which creates a huge obstacle for me to read, and I feel like I can't get any pleasure.

It is very awkward to change [(I)(you)] to [(Ru)(Wu)] in modern sentences. The author thinks this is good? If you want to write what the ancients said, write well. If you don't know how to write, just look up the information. If you want to write modern sentences, just write them, and just create parallel universes. I think your writing style is pretty good, but you combined ancient characters (just a few) with modern sentences. It's very nondescript and poisonous. Plus the history is bad. Finally, I would like to say that the words "ru" and "me" are too poisonous.

The title of this book is the biggest flaw. What is it about you and me? I wonder if you book friends will feel tired when reading it.

It looks uncomfortable and I'm not used to it. It's better to talk in plain language. What's yours and mys? I can't see it

Come on, come on, come on! Make up ten words.