Douluo: Fire Breathing Dragon, Loading Prompt

I have read more than 60 chapters so far. Let me briefly talk about my faults. 1 Is a common problem with cheat-like choices, that is, the options have different rewards. Although each option is what the protagonist wants to choose, the differences in rewards can easily lead to being accused of being a puppet of the system. 2. There are a lot of errors in the details. This may be due to the revision of the previous text, resulting in many inconsistencies in the details of the previous and later texts. 3. The writing style is a little bit worse. One sentence always has to be emphasized repeatedly. For example, the filial piety at the beginning basically means that when a person knows that the protagonist will not go to the Wuhun Palace, he has to deliberately repeat it. This son is filial and has a good nature. This problem also occurs later. 4 Is the panel. Basically, a panel is required every two or three chapters. It is unclear whether this problem will occur in later paid chapters, but at least in the first 60 free chapters, the total words on the panel alone can make up one chapter. 5 Is that the rewards given are too many and too strong, and the age and level are constantly increased. The rapid upgrade can be explained at least, but how to explain the upgrade of the soul ring's age? 6 Is a problem derived from 5. It imposes the aura of a good person on everyone in Wuhun Palace. It is not a trick. It is a secret that can increase the life of the soul ring even though the protagonist has a secret, but no one asks or grabs it. No one is greedy. This is too fake. Human nature is inherently evil and it is impossible for no one to be tempted. It would be better if you write a little about someone with evil intentions but being frightened by the golden crocodile. In summary, there are no major flaws. There are minor problems but they are not major and can be accepted. Although the overall quality is not excellent, it can pass the passing line. There is no deliberately disturbing plot. You can read it to pass the time in the book shortage.

Once the Silver Dragon King comes out, it is best not to be one of the protagonist's harem. Once he is in the protagonist's camp, it means that the protagonist will be the enemy of the entire God Realm. Fan fiction is written by God Realm and is written by idiots. The Silver Dragon King has always been hiding without being discovered. He has never left the Star Dou Forest. Do you believe it or not, if she dares to release a little breath, Xiu Luo Shen immediately led other god kings to the Douluo plane. If the Wuhun Temple camp only needs to be careful of Shura God and Poseidon, there is still the possibility of reconciliation. But if the Silver Dragon King is brought closer to the camp, it will be the enemy of the entire God Realm. The Rakshasa God and the Angel God are both first-level gods. How can they fight against the God Realm? Just become a god, which is only level 100 and level 100 to 109. There is one level difference between the third-level gods without god status and the real earth-level gods. Their strength can only be equivalent to the priests of the God Realm. There are many gods at this level. The second-level gods are from level 120 to 129, and the god king level is from 130 to 139. Let's put it this way. The only one who can fight is the protagonist. There is also the Divine Punishment Formation in the God Realm. Today, the five great god kings can even merge (possibly). After all, the Goddess of Life and the God of Destruction have intelligently merged, but the second-generation God of Evil and the Goddess of Goodness cannot do it. Obviously, the first-generation God can do it, but the consumption cannot kill the protagonist. The worst they can do is give up the Douluo plane. The main character has no role to play at all

The choices of the system are often limited to just a few. Follow the path of the original protagonist and always rely on choosing the system. Ennn has a feeling that the protagonist is the tool and the system is the boss. Although this is true, there are more descriptions of systems than people.

Anyway, in the first dozen chapters, the protagonist shows off his power. The second ring of the millennium, the two-year soul master. The whole city knows it. Then it was written to enter the Wuhun Palace immediately. Otherwise, it will be written that many forces will force him to join. I thought to myself that I didn't do this myself. Once there is a little progress, everyone in the city will know about it. Anyway, he is an Eastern licker.

There are too many small mistakes in the book you wrote. For example, you just said that you were over level 60, but in the end you only had 5 soul rings. You also just used the soul ring age enhancement card in the front leg, and the soul ring age in the back leg changed back. Does this make you lonely? I hope that when the author is writing, he will not just write a setting or an improvement in strength, and then you will write back the second step. You still have to remember it. You can't write a novel and still eat the book so easily, right?

As long as it's not from the Bibi Dong camp, it's all good.

Innate full soul power or top-notch beast soul? If you don't join the Spirit Hall, are you seeking death?

I can only say that she is pure and pure, does not stud, engages in ambiguous affairs, and has a single heroine.

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I just read a book about Gengar. The author previously wrote about a fire-breathing dragon Douluo fan who is very similar to you. Are you starting a trumpet?