The King of Wudang Wanders Around the Heavens as a Demon

The pace is too slow. I want to read "The Way to Die" in the introduction! Wow! As a result, every time someone else came to the door, he would take action, and he would never take the initiative. Although there is no holding back or anything, there is definitely nothing wrong with saying "Decisive in killing", but it still feels very uncomfortable. To put it in vulgar terms, there is a feeling of suffocation like "taking a shit without taking off your pants", but not the feeling of pleasure of "opening the toilet as wide as you want". Maybe the introduction gave me too high expectations😔, which deviated from the actual content in the chapter. This sense of gap naturally affects my evaluation of this book. PS: The protagonist is Xiaobao, who is also very good. But the introduction gave me unrealistic expectations, leading me to expect Dabao (a slang term unique to us Three Kingdoms players😋)

The Luo Li Bar is too awkward. I have no money to set up a stall and tell fortunes? Let's get rid of you traveling through ancient times. Then you would kill people and set fires at every turn. How about you become a good citizen? Do you bother to do this or that at all times? If someone wants to kill you, why don't you put them there and then call the police to arrest them and sentence them? I'm convinced, what's the purpose of time travel? Isn't it just for some refreshment? Food and sex, you have nothing but practice every day? How about trimming your hair? Why are you living like a dog for so long?

Suppress the combat power. Look at the snow first. A lot of nonsense before killing.

The writing of Datang is too slow and lengthy. The plot of "Into the Snow" is too fragmented, and the protagonist Tai Wang (the indigenous king who knows the plot) lacks subjective initiative. Wang Ye's character is not suitable for being the protagonist of most novels. Finally, let me complain, the more I read this chapter title, the less I want to read it.

The writing is very good. Even the world of Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty is too long. Can't stand it

Very well written, keep up the good work, author😘

It's okay at the beginning, but when it comes to the end, I feel like, well, how can I put it, I can't stand it, even if I skip it, it's not interesting.

It's a piece of shit. Fortunately, Shen Nong wasn't a modern person, otherwise he would have been poisoned to death.

I can only say that it's hard to comment, I couldn't stand watching half of it.

Zhen Neng Shui has read dozens of chapters. Almost every chapter only has one or two sentences related to the plot, and the rest is all about the content of various Taoist scriptures.