The Heavens Began to Forge Swords from the Ancient Dragon World

Let's not talk about how the protagonist can adapt to it just after time travel. He kills without blinking an eye, speaks in an ancient style, and doesn't care when faced with the naked body of beautiful women. Is he so awesome? Is he a modern person? Is he a genius or just a neurotic? The novel can be fake but not too fake. The protagonist can travel several years or have memories through soul travel. This is more reasonable.

Um, the setting is a bit boring. People travel through time and experience joy, hatred, magic and beauty. Now in this time travel, you have to be a blacksmith. Being a blacksmith emperor doesn't seem that enviable.

To be honest, I'm not picky. There are very few novels about Gu Long pretending to be weird. There are authors who can write Gu Long's smooth pretending style, which is very easy to write in an embarrassing style! Chapter 1, that's it! The insertion is very awkward and the integration is very rough. The result is that the reader is very embarrassed and his scalp is numb! I really shuddered when I saw this paragraph. The author is so brave that he actually wrote the beginning of Gu Long fanfic. . . How embarrassing. . . Slipping away.

In order to forge sword bone poison and let the sword holder massacre a town, do you think the design is very subtle, but have you or I forgotten that your book is classified into martial arts? Why do people read martial arts, for martial arts and for chivalry? Those who follow the dark trend in everything will eventually be counterattacked

Gu Long is actually quite difficult to write well. Although the story itself is very Jianghu flavor, every character in it is a pretentious person who talks too much. Most of the good Gulong fanfics are made by Lezi people, because it is too awkward for the protagonist to pretend to be cool with the people in Gulong, so they can only use the Lezi people's personality to bring down the opponent's coolness. You, the main character, are a coquettish coquettish person, and you show off all the time. You don't pick up girls or make friends, and you look very unsociable.

The writing is quite good. Each world can have a heroine.

Brother, the contents of your Lu Xiaofeng volume are exactly the same as those in the book of All Heavens starting with Lu Xiaofeng. Which of you copied whom?

I don't know how to brush up the ratings either.

There is no Gu Long's writing style, but there is Gu Long's disease.

It's normal for your subject matter to be popular. It's too niche. There are a few readers who like to watch blacksmiths.