Lu Mingfei Doesn't Want to Be a Superhero

In fact, Su Xiaoqiang's writing here is so good that it would be hard not to accept it. It would be okay if Su Xiaoqiang added a double heroine named Er Li Yi. You know the author, every time I have a monthly vote, I will vote for you first.

First of all, let me write it at the front. Personally, I am not averse to novels with single heroines, multiple heroines, harems, bulldozers, etc. I have read all types of novels, and I still have books on my bookshelf, which I take out and read from time to time. Now that the premise is out of the way, let's talk about the book When I first saw this book, I admired it very much. The author's setting is okay, and the early character creation is also okay. The story logic and content writing can be understood by me who has never watched Marvel. I even think it is better than the world of dragons. Although the emotional drama is a bit awkward, so far, I am still willing to give the author five stars. Then the author started to let himself go. At first I thought it was a single female protagonist, but then the story changed and the protagonist started to provoke other girls. I thought it would be a multi-female protagonist, which is also good. As a pure LSP, I still enjoyed watching it. Then, as a reader, I just changed my position and started to support more female protagonists. The protagonist provoked more than 5 girls. Oops, I thought I was going to turn to harem novels. Harem novels are also fine. Reading novels is all about relaxing. Then I didn't notice that among the high-quality female characters who appeared, except for those who were already famous and married, most of the remaining characters had ambiguous descriptions with the male protagonist. Now it seems that I am going to be a bulldozer and never return. I don't care. I'm just reading a novel. Isn't it allowed to let go? As a result, by the time I read more than 300 chapters, the male protagonist had not yet confirmed his relationship with Ren and the female protagonist! There is only one boyfriend-girlfriend relationship, and it is based on a bet, and the woman takes the initiative. More than 300 chapters later, the women are willing to sleep in the same bed, and the hero is still pretending to be stupid. Later, one of the women takes off her clothes on her own initiative, and the author wants another heroine to come and interrupt. The hero is still admitting his mistake, but still does not express his position. Let me evaluate the male protagonist, that is: he does not take the initiative, does not refuse, does not commit, talks a lot but does nothing, does not take responsibility and only admits his mistakes. He is a pure scumbag. Although I have read bulldozer stories and many harem stories, I cannot appreciate this kind of irresponsible male protagonist. It may be that this kind of plot development makes many readers unhappy. In the comments that follow, more and more people have opinions. The author has also begun to update steadily from daily to more than once a week. I don't know if this book will be a eunuch. Just reading the content at the front of this book, I give it five stars In the mid-term stock market, the male protagonist's setting collapsed, so I can only give it two stars. As for the update, it's really a trap. I hope the author just didn't clear his mind and can resume updating as soon as possible. Finally, I still hope that the author can change the character of the male protagonist. The irresponsible male protagonist is really a bit unnatural.

The relationship with the little goddess has been laid out like this, and you tell me later whether you want to accept him or open a harem. I really feel so uncomfortable. It doesn't matter what the Dragon Clan book is like, but you won't include the little goddess in the emotional line of your book. You can't mix the emotion of the original work with the emotion of your own book.

It can only be said that it is not as obscene as the worst doujins, but it is only at a medium level. Conflicts in settings have already appeared in the first few dozen chapters. The character creation is also unsatisfactory. As the main character, Iron Man does not make people feel like Iron Man in comics or movies. If you want to use this existing character as the main character to promote the plot, you need to have a good grasp of the character's personality, language habits, and way of thinking. What we need is a Tony Stark in a different story, not a character who wears an iron suit and is imagined by you. When you write about Marvel, you need to feel like Marvel, and when you write about Dragons, you need to feel like Dragons. As a novel that travels in both directions, this is bound to be difficult. As for how to write well, I don't know. This is exactly the problem you need to overcome as an author. But as far as the reading experience is concerned, the unclear setting, the failure of character creation, and the cliché of the storyline do not make me want to continue reading. The author must continue to work hard, come on

I can understand that a lot of writing has been spent on Su Xiaoqiang's early character, and the emotional drama has been laid out. As Lu Mingfei inevitably enrolls in Kassel College, the author does not want this character to be unable to keep up with the main plot, so he arranges for her to enter the college. But what is the operation of sending the Phoenix Power from another world? Also, the emotional scenes were too protracted. The interactions with Zero and Charlotte made me feel like I was watching Louis Koo's version of Yang Guo with a succubus physique. All the people who didn't have a partner got excited when they saw Lu Mingfei. To be honest, when I saw Samson transforming into a woman, I thought he couldn't escape either. Then I go on to say, author, you can write emotional dramas, and you can write them to the end, but you have to write this kind of plot that everyone understands and thinks is confused, and you push forward long stretches of emotional dramas. After a few chapters, it seems that this part of the memory has been cleared in the minds of the protagonists, and they have to do it again. The characterization of Zero may sound like being brave enough to seize opportunities that are not in the original work, but as the author, have you forgotten that it was Zero who made a life-and-death contract with Zero in Black Swan Port, brother? Have you already acquiesced that No. 0 Is completely equal to Lu Mingfei? Ling, a young girl with no family, went to sleep with Lu Mingfei with family planning supplies. Do you think it's funny that the character Ling said this?

You write well, you write well, just because you write well, you write well, Jiangnan is just a G8, he knows nothing about the Dragon Clan

Iron Man's prototype mecha is certainly very powerful, but if I, Lu Mingfei, am about to die and activate keel mode, how would you respond?

After many days, when I think of this book, I can't help but feel unhappy. The author probably won't see it, so I'll write it first and then talk about it. In addition to character creation in novels, I personally feel that the second most important thing is when to "go offline." It doesn't necessarily mean dead, but it means that the character should disappear after a certain plot. If it is delayed and piled into the main plot, it will immediately create countless plot flaws. Take the female protagonist Su as an example. The original setting is that the male protagonist is a "qingmei/classmate". If Lu Ming has to embark on the road of dragon slaying, he and Su will inevitably be separated. In order to let Su continue to keep up with the plot, the author forcibly turns Su into a hybrid. It is understandable, but because Su has been set as an ordinary person since he was a child. , So it can only be written as the weakest type of hybrid, which cannot enter Kassel at all. The author chose Deus Ex Machina and directly gave the Phoenix Force one step. Now, even if Su appears on the battlefield against Nidhogg, the author will not have to make up a reason. So, what is the price? The price is that this book is no longer a fan of the Dragon Clan but a fan of Marvel. The other one was contaminated by the ancient dragon serum and the bloodline was improved, but was saved by Lu Mingfei, and then the academy was specially invited to be a student for supervision nearby. It is definitely much better than the inexplicable Phoenix Force, and there are examples in the original book. A Su who can defeat most people appears at will. What is the meaning of other mixed-blood species? Readers just want to laugh when reading this sentence of bursting blood and releasing the heart of a lion. Can it beat the Phoenix Power that I, the heroine Su, can get by touching the weapon casually? And the biggest poisonous point of this book is not this, it is the most terrifying. There is a way to speculate on CP, and it is not random speculation. The male protagonist does not take the initiative and refuses to enjoy the feelings of each female partner. Is this a short online drama? Lu Mingfei is so sensitive. Is it because he can't understand other women's affection for him? Of course you can say that it was because of Tony's teachings that Lu Mingfei became enlightened, so you might as well write about hugging left and right openly, but you have to let the female protagonist take the initiative, and forget about it. In order to continue to promote CP in the future, you don't dare to write it to the end. I laughed when I saw Zero taking the initiative to find a way with family planning supplies. I laughed again when Lu was passive and refused to come out and had sex without "just happening" to interrupt. Is the character Zero still a little bit charming in your writing? Jiangnan owes all readers an apology, and you owe him one. You are just consuming the characters he wrote, and you are using the worst kind. How about next time you let Ling take a shower and Lu Mingfei accidentally puts it back on and smashes it on her? Just keep consuming

It's almost 300 chapters. The male protagonist is still a virgin. The key is that there are many women who are willing. Moreover, the protagonist is still an 18-year-old adolescent boy. It is the time when he is most curious about women. Unless the bottom is gone, it is impossible to have no ideas.

This update, look at others, then look at you, hey~~~