Hogwarts New Professor

Well, how should I put it? Overall, it's actually pretty good. However, this book has a very big poisonous point, and that is: the protagonist is really too awesome! ! ! The awesome here does not mean awesome in terms of strength, but that many awesome people inexplicably value him! For example: Take the chapter 780 when you encounter a snake in the Chamber of Secrets. The conversation between Voldemort and the protagonist and Dumbledore is really poisonous! I really find it strange: No matter how down-trodden Tom DeLier is, he is still the second-generation Dark Lord, so why is he so angry when facing a protagonist with relatively low strength? Even if a container was destroyed, it wouldn't be so pretentious! That part was really eye-popping to watch. In addition, there are several smaller poisonous points, such as the protagonist's name for Sirius. The author clearly stated that the protagonist and Sirius are friends, but the protagonist never calls Sirius by his name, but always calls him "Sirius," which is really off-putting. Overall, this book is still very good, but there are indeed some places where it is easy to be dissuaded.

I haven't read it yet, but the author's naming skills are too bad, right? I obviously have a foreign heart, but I still use a Chinese name. This is like calling me Jean-Pierre Wang Goudan!

I think... You should add a little more battle scenes and tutorials. I forgot which work I saw, but the description of magical battles was great. It says that even if the wizard's magic misses, don't walk past. It is possible that trap magic and transformation spells have been cast. I think this is great. I have a suggestion for you...

First of all, the plot is not cliché. I have read too many time-travel fanfics, most of which are in the Lion Court, with the main plot, and doing tasks with Harry and the others, but this one is different. The plot is novel. The protagonist Xia Ran rises from the third and fourth levels to the seventh level legendary wizard. Not only does the system help <Absorb Force Points, I thought the protagonist will absorb the Force Points on the Sorting Hat> but also the protagonist's own efforts and opportunities. The protagonist does not completely believe in Dumbledore, but slowly makes Dumbledore believe in himself. Moreover, the protagonist is resourceful and knows how to protect himself without revealing that he is an outsider. Secondly, there is no heroine. The main reason why the plots of other books collapse is that they have female protagonists, and they don't know how to write a love line, so they have to add a love line. The key is that every emotional line is either Hermione or Hermione. Although Emma is very beautiful, but... As for that? ? ? Finally, the author's writing style. No more words, just one word - Absolute! Love it, love it. Of course, if the details of Xia Ran, Harry, Voldemort and others were written at the end, it would be the icing on the cake.

The first part was pretty good, but the last few scenes felt a bit rushed. Maybe it was because no one had read it, so I rushed to the end. It felt like it ended suddenly.

It's so beautiful, just what I like. I just hope the update can be faster.

Basically just follow the plot, the protagonist's explanation is "fear of something going wrong"! "If it is changed, it will be more serious." The essence is that the author is too limited to change the plot. For the same reason, the protagonist's strength is set very confusingly. He keeps saying that he is not as good as this or that, and it is basically impossible to beat him in a fight. The whole thing is just a mess. The role of the protagonist is to promote the plot on behalf of the plot characters. For example, no one discovered the secret room, and when something happened, he went to remind him in the bathroom (previously, he watched the accident without saying a word and then reminded him when it fit the plot). After Lockhart, Old Deng was worried that he had no teacher, so he suggested Lupine (there was no reason to fit the original work, Sirius continued to keep him locked up and naturally escaped from prison, and Peter also watched him continue to behave). The whole thing is a tool. The characters in the original book have basically not changed. I want to whitewash the Malfoy family, but just analyzing how the family is so bad in the original plot is not complete. I just don't want to add some scenes in the current plot to prove this point. Harry was still as self-righteous as ever, unwilling to trust adults, reckless and unwilling to make progress, and he did not correct or teach him. He kept talking about how brave Neville would be in the future, and always encouraged others, but there was no actual change. It gives me the feeling that you just follow the plot and keep track of it, and forcefully give the protagonist a sense of existence. Apart from foresight and foreknowledge of the protagonist's essence, he has no merit, and he doesn't work hard or change, but he can always beat the opponent, and it's just a fee. However, the book was written very early, and it seems that the chronology shouldn't be so harsh. It took me 24 years to see this work. From the current perspective, it is really not good.

I haven't watched it yet, who is the heroine? Is it Hermione?

In fact, I wanted to say it a long time ago, but I thought the author would fill in this place, but he didn't. That place is: the protagonist's upgrade speed. At the age of 26, the protagonist's magic power is only level 4; about three or four years later, he will reach level 6, which is close to Dumbledore's strength. Should Dumbledore focus on this kind of person? It was fine when you returned the sword, but you clearly showed a flaw when you returned the Goblet of Fire. Why don't you fix it quickly? In addition to this, the protagonist has studied Horcruxes and he still can't figure out anything? Are you underestimating one of the strongest people in the world? Also, isn't the protagonist's way of replenishing the Force too poisonous? According to the author's rules, there is so much that can be added! For example: the old tables and chairs in the college, the 9.75 Train at the station, etc. Alas, I hope the author can be more rigorous in the future!

Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, the author will update quickly.