Thunder Ax

I read the first chapter and it was so weird. I have never seen Cologne, but I have seen some clips of Cologne, and I roughly know something about the so-called [Cologne flavor]. My evaluation is that the dialogue in this book has the flavor of Gu Long, but I cannot see the core logic of Gu Long. For example, Chapter 1, first of all, the story takes place in a late-night wooden house scene with no description of the background. The two brothers are making fire and cooking, and it is obvious that the eldest brother is the owner. However, this environment is not like an inn, where an escort can come in and disturb at will. The owner does not mind and treats each other with courtesy, as if he is reciting fixed lines; The brothers finished the fight, so they didn't eat the fish, right? It's rude and makes the cooking itself have no plot or environmental value. It only serves the purpose of eliciting the opening lines of dialogue; The escort's intrusion directly escalated to a desperate situation. The eldest brother was still waiting for death with his eyes closed. The focus of the perspective was completely shifted from the escort. The younger brother who invited the escort to come over showed no sign. Even the elder brother seemed to think that the younger brother would let the escort kill him under his eyes. This was really ridiculous. Overall, the first chapter gave me the impression that "I made this plate of dumplings for this dish of vinegar". Just for the cologne-flavored dialogue design at the end of the chapter, I wrote such a long plot that the logic and function of the plot itself were not considered at all.

As for ancient dragon novels, there are fewer of them now. I hope the author will write well. Come on!

One (1) Introducing Jin Kaijia and Fengming Tiao. Jin Kaijia's weapon should be the artifact of this book. He is not from Sichuan and is good at cooking Sichuan cuisine. Feng Mingtiao is Jin Kaijia's adopted brother. He is good at swordsmanship and mental arithmetic. Now he wants to find his old man. (2) Send off and compete in martial arts. The escort kidnapped Bai Mingtiao away, leading to the following story. Two (1) Qinglong Hall is not easy to mess with, but Jin Kaijia wants to break into it. (2) Ask for help first before rescuing people. The young man in white brings Jin Kaijia to find Mr. Sun. (3) Location. Three (1) The character image of Old Man Sun (2) Dialogue (3) Know the clues and lead to the following Four (1) Asking for people and ruining the situation (2) 🤔Why? Did you show off and run to take a shower? Five (1) The hero saves the beauty scene (2) Huh? 🤔I don't understand. Wasn't he kidnapped? I don't understand what this development is. Six test, flirt

The book is very interesting, but I really didn't expect Jin to be the protagonist. I thought it would be Feng, haha. Who would have thought that Feng suddenly changed his appearance and became a villain (no), come on, madam~ Liu Qingqing is very cute haha, the description of the powdery frost is too ancient (no)