The Second Generation of the Strongest Immortal in the City
by Dongfeng
About This Novel
What, you are still practicing with Reiki. No way, you are still working hard to polish your bones and refine your body. Look at me, I put my two fingers together with my sword, plug in the 220-volt civilian power supply, and just charge it. Who can afford to offend a walking power bank? Snort....
Official Sources
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 1mo ago
to author
As an old bookworm, what I read was really awkward. This is my personal sense. I asked the author if he could try reading it with audio. You will find the problem. It is like being kidnapped and handcuffed, and then changing shoes with a female teacher. I can't understand it. How did I get back? By car? I was completely confused as to how to take off the handcuffs at the back. It looked very awkward. I rarely comment. This is the only one that gave me a pretty good idea, but the plot expression was a bit uninteresting. You'd better watch and read more. I feel like you still have a long way to go in terms of how to get through the plot and how to detail it.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 1mo ago
to author
As an old bookworm, what I read was really awkward. This is my personal sense. I asked the author if he could try reading it with audio. You will find the problem. It is like being kidnapped and handcuffed, and then changing shoes with a female teacher. I can't understand it. How did I get back? By car? I was completely confused as to how to take off the handcuffs at the back. It looked very awkward. I rarely comment. This is the only one that gave me a pretty good idea, but the plot expression was a bit uninteresting. You'd better watch and read more. I feel like you still have a long way to go in terms of how to get through the plot and how to detail it.
You Might Also Like
Divine Eye Appraiser
Crazy
Counterattack and Become a Boss after Not Going to Work
Dust And Me
Reborn Female General
Qianshan Tea Guest
Thief Killer Special Forces
Listening To The Rain Hourglass
What Should I Do If it Becomes Popular Before I Debut?
Meng Chaonan
Reborn Industrial Tycoon
Pass The Test
There is a Door in My Mind
Mint Can Also Cause Internal Heat
The Account at the Beginning Was Stolen and I Recharged 1 Million
Wine Sword Immortal
National Medical Examiner
Shitori Village
Returning to Farming in Qiqi to Raise Children
Ginsengwa