
Tianwu
by Jiuheng
About This Novel
New Book: My Senior Brother Peerless Chen Luo looks weak and harmless to humans and animals, and is always mistaken for a love interest. It's just that no one knows that he is a genius in the two fields of witchcraft and formation. His witchcraft attainments are abnormal and arrogant in the world, and his formation skills are unparalleled. He can turn his hands into clouds and his hands into rain. Geniuses couldn't stand him. After getting angry, they realized how terrifying this pretty boy was. He was completely a devil in the clothes of an angel. One by one, the goddesses were curious about him. After getting to know him, they realized how mysterious this pretty boy was. They unraveled layer after layer, endlessly. In the end, instead of failing to understand him, they all fell into each other and were unable to extricate themselves.
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Official(320)Scraped 29d ago
Chen Luo used his frail appearance to hide his true strength. Under the contemptuous eyes of everyone, his coat began to peel off layer by layer, emitting a light that shocked the world.
I just read the introduction and thought it was rubbish.
What a silly protagonist
I have never seen a protagonist like this, a silly romantic drama, someone who has been in a relationship for four years and doesn't know whether to love someone else or not? It's really uncomfortable to watch
Dog behind the scenes
Are protagonists (characters) like this very popular nowadays? There are many such dog protagonists. They are obviously powerful and have to be abused before they fight back. It doesn't matter that the author is good at writing, but he is just a dog that follows the wind. It's disgusting.
I'm crazy, I'm crazy, but I can't kill anyone
I have read more than two hundred chapters, and there are just a few old enemies fighting each other. The whole story is so crazy and embarrassing. I am the one who is punished in the end. None of the enemies are dead. How long does it take to write with just a few people? The more I read, the more disgusting I feel.
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Tell me about your writing style! It's a bit lacking, and all I can see is indecisiveness. I've read hundreds of chapters and haven't killed a single person yet! Secondly, it is not advisable to blindly suppress the protagonist's explosion, because if you eat the same dish for a long time, you will get tired of it. Don't be angry. I saw the protagonist was knocked out of the mortal world and returned to the original college where his respected teacher was wasted. When writing this, you should explode happily instead of suppressing it and then explode. Maybe you have an outline to consider, but you forgot that readers also have inner feelings. I hope you can refer to other people's novels to write your next book well.
Harem novel?
From the synopsis, it's another harem story. I don't like the fact that the male protagonist has sex with every girl. It's too fussy. Either the women's hair is of no use, or they're too good-looking and have a lot of trouble. They're nosy, extremely curious, and get in the way when something happens. Before I even started reading, I felt that the synopsis is a harem story. Don't complain.
The setting is really unreasonable and you can't watch it without using your brain.
OK OK
It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. Come on^0^~
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Community(0)
Official(320)Scraped 29d ago
Chen Luo used his frail appearance to hide his true strength. Under the contemptuous eyes of everyone, his coat began to peel off layer by layer, emitting a light that shocked the world.
I just read the introduction and thought it was rubbish.
What a silly protagonist
I have never seen a protagonist like this, a silly romantic drama, someone who has been in a relationship for four years and doesn't know whether to love someone else or not? It's really uncomfortable to watch
Dog behind the scenes
Are protagonists (characters) like this very popular nowadays? There are many such dog protagonists. They are obviously powerful and have to be abused before they fight back. It doesn't matter that the author is good at writing, but he is just a dog that follows the wind. It's disgusting.
I'm crazy, I'm crazy, but I can't kill anyone
I have read more than two hundred chapters, and there are just a few old enemies fighting each other. The whole story is so crazy and embarrassing. I am the one who is punished in the end. None of the enemies are dead. How long does it take to write with just a few people? The more I read, the more disgusting I feel.
view
Tell me about your writing style! It's a bit lacking, and all I can see is indecisiveness. I've read hundreds of chapters and haven't killed a single person yet! Secondly, it is not advisable to blindly suppress the protagonist's explosion, because if you eat the same dish for a long time, you will get tired of it. Don't be angry. I saw the protagonist was knocked out of the mortal world and returned to the original college where his respected teacher was wasted. When writing this, you should explode happily instead of suppressing it and then explode. Maybe you have an outline to consider, but you forgot that readers also have inner feelings. I hope you can refer to other people's novels to write your next book well.
Harem novel?
From the synopsis, it's another harem story. I don't like the fact that the male protagonist has sex with every girl. It's too fussy. Either the women's hair is of no use, or they're too good-looking and have a lot of trouble. They're nosy, extremely curious, and get in the way when something happens. Before I even started reading, I felt that the synopsis is a harem story. Don't complain.
The setting is really unreasonable and you can't watch it without using your brain.
OK OK
It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. It's booming. Come on^0^~










