
My Bright Sword Logistics Career
About This Novel
This is just a boring war fantasy from a boring person. This is a writing practice, so don't have any expectations!
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Official(32)Scraped 4d ago
Logic is a big problem
Traveling thousands of miles to assassinate someone is an unreasonable mission! Can't you send a task nearby? The independent group became an assassin group?
I like this book very much. It has an overall view and a strategic view. It is full of useful information and is not muddled.
Why don't you update the trash? , I know how to be lazy every day!
It's very boring. If you don't personally participate in the plot, you're just a trading tool person.
The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Please update it quickly.
What about the most important logistical item, food?
What about the most important food? Everyday firearms
come on
Come on, Goldfinger's writing is not excessive, and some professional knowledge is OK, but I feel that the appearance and departure of the protagonist, and even what he did after leaving Li Yunlong, are not explained. It feels good to be reminded of the content of the original drama when watching it. I hope that a little more protagonist's plot can be added in the subsequent plots. There are actually many dialogues in the original drama that you can look at carefully. My favorite is the dialogue between Li Yunlong and Chu Yunfei, which is gentle on the surface but has its own purpose. I hope the author will work hard.
Tmd is jumping around. Can you fucking finish one thing and then write another? Tnd writes one paragraph, jumps to another, and then picks it up with tmd. Elementary school students can write better than you.
Why is it cold?
Why do you think it's so cool? It's because I'm not allowed to write what I wrote later because it's taboo.
Monthly passes are exchanged for updates. Can you change it? I gave it first.
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Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 4d ago
Logic is a big problem
Traveling thousands of miles to assassinate someone is an unreasonable mission! Can't you send a task nearby? The independent group became an assassin group?
I like this book very much. It has an overall view and a strategic view. It is full of useful information and is not muddled.
Why don't you update the trash? , I know how to be lazy every day!
It's very boring. If you don't personally participate in the plot, you're just a trading tool person.
The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Please update it quickly.
What about the most important logistical item, food?
What about the most important food? Everyday firearms
come on
Come on, Goldfinger's writing is not excessive, and some professional knowledge is OK, but I feel that the appearance and departure of the protagonist, and even what he did after leaving Li Yunlong, are not explained. It feels good to be reminded of the content of the original drama when watching it. I hope that a little more protagonist's plot can be added in the subsequent plots. There are actually many dialogues in the original drama that you can look at carefully. My favorite is the dialogue between Li Yunlong and Chu Yunfei, which is gentle on the surface but has its own purpose. I hope the author will work hard.
Tmd is jumping around. Can you fucking finish one thing and then write another? Tnd writes one paragraph, jumps to another, and then picks it up with tmd. Elementary school students can write better than you.
Why is it cold?
Why do you think it's so cool? It's because I'm not allowed to write what I wrote later because it's taboo.
Monthly passes are exchanged for updates. Can you change it? I gave it first.









