
Tokyo Affectionate Legend
by Too Late
About This Novel
The soul travels to Tokyo in a parallel world. Both parents are dead, the family is ruined, and there is only 30,000 yen left in savings. There is a girl who claims to be his valet, and he even has a fiancée with whom he has not a good relationship. All elements are complete. Kitagawa Che can be sure that he got a standard protagonist script. But things seemed different from what he imagined. A month later, the step of breaking off the engagement seemed to be stuck.
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Official(23)Scraped 22d ago
There is no main plot in the whole story, there are too many subplots for the female protagonist, and the plot of the male protagonist's interactions with each female protagonist is too deliberate.
I have read more than 60 chapters, and the writing is really good and very comfortable. However, I don't quite understand a cold-blooded male protagonist being the male protagonist of a light novel. Personally, I feel like he is like a neutered male cat, watching various female cats flirt with him. Compared with the ordinary gentle and scumbag male protagonist, Also, his character can be found in business war novels or romantic novels, but it should not be in light novels that focus on marriage and love. Moreover, a lot of daily life is mentioned in one stroke, and the plot does not develop much. It feels like there are too many characters appearing too fast, which makes the reading less sticky. If you are short of books, you can come and read them, just to relax.
So far the writing is pretty good.
Below we interview the author of this book; why do you write novels? Just eat. How long have you been writing novels? Ninety. What do you eat when you are tired from writing a novel? Wine and food. What novels do you think are good? Save the world. What do you think of the novels being written on various platforms now? Just shit. What do you think of the novel you wrote? Bail out the market. What is your novel about? Old things. Will you make a living from writing novels in the future? That's right. Do you only know this sentence? Sodayo
The male protagonist does not take the initiative or refuse
It seemed okay from the beginning, but after seeing that the fiancée has confirmed the relationship and given her innocence, the male protagonist still does not take the initiative or refuse to others. He and his fiancée have clearly come a step further, and they can do so many unnatural things to spread warmth inadvertently. Call me an emotional idiot and fart. Could he not feel the attitude of the other heroines towards him? Halfway through, I really didn't want to watch anymore. The male protagonist has not changed at all. He is still the same as hell. He shines in other areas, but becomes an idiot in relationships. He always leaves an indelible impression on other girls even if he has a fiancée.
The further back I look, the more something feels wrong.
I don't quite understand why you write so little about time travel these days. I feel that this way of writing is the worst. You still have to write about some kind of engagement in time travel, a maid, a sister, etc. I wonder if you can inherit your wife through time travel, right?
The male protagonist has a cold personality, which is inconsistent with the young male protagonist. The plot is bland and the female protagonist has a repetitive character, but the writing is good.
I couldn't stand it after reading more than a hundred chapters. This kind of frigid male protagonist is annoying, and his maid is submissive, which makes me irritated. I was fine with other books, but this one made me angry, so I gave up.
It feels more and more boring
The rest of the writing is too bland, there are no ups and downs, and it feels uninteresting.
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Official(23)Scraped 22d ago
There is no main plot in the whole story, there are too many subplots for the female protagonist, and the plot of the male protagonist's interactions with each female protagonist is too deliberate.
I have read more than 60 chapters, and the writing is really good and very comfortable. However, I don't quite understand a cold-blooded male protagonist being the male protagonist of a light novel. Personally, I feel like he is like a neutered male cat, watching various female cats flirt with him. Compared with the ordinary gentle and scumbag male protagonist, Also, his character can be found in business war novels or romantic novels, but it should not be in light novels that focus on marriage and love. Moreover, a lot of daily life is mentioned in one stroke, and the plot does not develop much. It feels like there are too many characters appearing too fast, which makes the reading less sticky. If you are short of books, you can come and read them, just to relax.
So far the writing is pretty good.
Below we interview the author of this book; why do you write novels? Just eat. How long have you been writing novels? Ninety. What do you eat when you are tired from writing a novel? Wine and food. What novels do you think are good? Save the world. What do you think of the novels being written on various platforms now? Just shit. What do you think of the novel you wrote? Bail out the market. What is your novel about? Old things. Will you make a living from writing novels in the future? That's right. Do you only know this sentence? Sodayo
The male protagonist does not take the initiative or refuse
It seemed okay from the beginning, but after seeing that the fiancée has confirmed the relationship and given her innocence, the male protagonist still does not take the initiative or refuse to others. He and his fiancée have clearly come a step further, and they can do so many unnatural things to spread warmth inadvertently. Call me an emotional idiot and fart. Could he not feel the attitude of the other heroines towards him? Halfway through, I really didn't want to watch anymore. The male protagonist has not changed at all. He is still the same as hell. He shines in other areas, but becomes an idiot in relationships. He always leaves an indelible impression on other girls even if he has a fiancée.
The further back I look, the more something feels wrong.
I don't quite understand why you write so little about time travel these days. I feel that this way of writing is the worst. You still have to write about some kind of engagement in time travel, a maid, a sister, etc. I wonder if you can inherit your wife through time travel, right?
The male protagonist has a cold personality, which is inconsistent with the young male protagonist. The plot is bland and the female protagonist has a repetitive character, but the writing is good.
I couldn't stand it after reading more than a hundred chapters. This kind of frigid male protagonist is annoying, and his maid is submissive, which makes me irritated. I was fine with other books, but this one made me angry, so I gave up.
It feels more and more boring
The rest of the writing is too bland, there are no ups and downs, and it feels uninteresting.














