This is Your World

If Li Wushuang and the Northern Qi ministers were very sure that the protagonist was the Northern Qi prince, there was really no need to personally assassinate Zhao Jing. You can let Li Wushuang delegate power to Li Beifeng, and let Li Beifeng have his own power so that he has the power and strength to do things that can improve his prestige. It is easy to write about any specific things. For example, use wisdom to restrain those who are currently disloyal to the old party, neutralize the old party and the remaining figures in Yaowang Valley, and thereby strengthen your own power. You can destroy Zhao Jing's plan, you can eat away at the princess's power, etc. There is a lot that can be written. There are many benefits to writing this way. First, you can cultivate a relationship with Li Suyi to highlight the main character's image. Second, you can better conceal that you are the prince of Northern Qi to facilitate things. Third, you can use your own power to trick the princess and Zhao Jing into killing each other. Of course, both sides will lose. It seems that what I said is simple, but the specific details particularly test the writing skills. The fourth can make the Yaowang Valley incident blend into the overall situation and connect to the above. The fifth can be related to that Su? It would be easier to join forces. Of course, the premise is that she is accepted and she wins the fight for the rights of the Su family. This can make her character and the image of her fiancée more three-dimensional, and can provide financial resources for her own power. The interlocking links connect everything mentioned above. Of course, what I said above is all nonsense. You have sent Li Beifeng to assassinate him. I feel that it will be difficult for you to write later, because Li Beifeng has little power and weak martial arts. It is difficult to write well if he only relies on his brain power to kill Zhao Jing. I suggest that you'd better let Li Beifeng take over the Northern Qi power, not all of it, but some of it. This will be very easy to write about later. You can refer to what I said above. To be honest, Li Suyi in this book feels very vague to me. Her character is not distinctive enough, and she has no special features. Basically, she is no different from the heroines in other novels who have cold personalities. This is why I suggest you take over Northern Qi's party power. It can give you more space to make Li Suyi's image more three-dimensional, as well as the princess. Also, it's not necessarily necessary to include all the heroines. For example, that Princess Zhaoguo, you can completely write her to death. The broken mountains and rivers of Jozhao and the rebirth of Northern Qi from Nirvana. She understood her feelings for Li Beifeng, but for this broken mountains and rivers, she sacrificed herself for her mission and so on. Although she is dead, she still lives in Li Beifeng's heart. If you write her well, her image will be three-dimensional and she can even stay in the readers' hearts. Some readers who like princesses may be reluctant. Let me explain. Because she is basically the same as Li Suyi, I don't mind accepting her. To sum up, author, this is my advice to you, I hope you can be inspired.

I have read more than 20 chapters. The book is okay, but the routines are a bit old. I can see the shadows of the routines of various novels more than ten years ago. For example, the line about baby kissing is obviously a routine from urban novels more than ten years ago. Including treating the eldest lady with this routine, such as the miracle doctor coming down from the mountain and the birth of the King of Soldiers. Second, if you don't understand medical skills, you can assign other specialties to the protagonist. I know this is an alternate history, with internal skills and so on. The problem is that if you give the protagonist a time-travel setting of a modern doctor, and it turns out that his treatment depends almost entirely on the ancient books given to him by his father, then what is the use of this setting? Can't we check to see what diseases were not cured in ancient times but can be cured now due to various reasons? I remember there should be quite a few such diseases, right? Also, it may be a matter of the author's personal preferences. Regardless of the actual situation of women in ancient times, I met a total of four women, a heroine, a childhood sweetheart, a maid, and an eldest lady. I didn't see anything about the words and deeds of ancient women. Each one had a worse character than the last.

The whole book is full of women, and they are not strong enough to be in it. The supporting male characters except the prince have a role, and the others are all completed in one chapter. A harem is not a harem. The protagonist swears to love her in front of a woman, and then turns around and has an affair with another woman. I suspect that dog licking is another side job of the author. At the end of the whole book, I haven't seen the protagonist succeed in getting a female protagonist. He is completely indifferent to the protagonist, but he still looks up to her.

Forget about the procrastination of the plot, the main character is a green tea with double standards. If you want a harem, and you don't have the ability to write it, then you might as well have a single female protagonist. If it's a girl, go up and lick it. Qianfei told Li Suyi that she loved her so much that he wanted to do whatever he wanted with her. After sleeping one night, he immediately had an affair with another person the next day. Not to mention the other girls, what disgusts me the most is that since I love Li Suyi so much, that princess is still her life and death enemy. She behaves so arrogantly in front of me. I guarantee that it is just a chance encounter to help me get revenge or something. As soon as I walked away, you started licking her. Have you never seen a woman before or something? Since the heroine is determined to be Li Suyi, let's write it well! After watching the whole process, Li Suyi was full of lies. As long as it's a female protagonist, she's always a loser. Anyway, this book is uncomfortable to read and extremely poisonous.

There are 100 chapters, and there are so many words about water surrounding two women. No wonder so many novels are written about women. It's just because of the word count. It made me uncomfortable to death, and the protagonist is still a dog licker. Others don't want to heal, so the protagonist forcefully practices medicine. I guess if a man is like this, the protagonist shouldn't be like this. If you like dog licking, you can watch it. It's still okay.

Did you buy this rating? I have no brains, no sense of perspective, and I can't walk around when I see a woman.

Qiuyue, this idiot, what did the protagonist do? She describes her dislike for the protagonist every day. She is just a servant and has no points? What is she? I saved her master and made a bad face to the protagonist every day. I was really drunk and didn't have the consciousness of a servant at all. Author, can you write it like this? ?

I feel very familiar with this book, I feel like I have read it a long time ago

Licking the dog until the end The protagonist licks Li Suyi Miss Shen licks the protagonist When the protagonist was still laughing at Old Man Li, he didn't know that he was also the same dog.

I feel that your current organization is just for the sake of the harem and Zhao Ying for the sake of Zhao Ying. The protagonist loves the alliance leader so much, not to mention having his own child. Respond to other people's comments and what you wrote earlier. It is the alliance leader who lets the protagonist know his significance in this world, and this child belongs to him alone. In that case, why did the protagonist give up killing the prince? Is he so assured that Zhao Wushuang will not get angry and take action against the alliance leader or the child? You must know that the protagonist was unexpectedly not included in the original plan. You make me feel that the protagonist is very inconsistent, and there is a feeling that the leader and the child suddenly don't care. Hey... Although I also want to watch the princess. But the logic of your writing is a bit lacking. I have no other intention. I just hope that the more I write, the better. After all, I read it all in one night.