Rise of the Planet of the Apes
About This Novel
After the protagonist traveled through time and came to this world, he discovered that this was a barbaric era. Human civilization is still in an era of slash-and-burn farming, animal skins for clothing, and wood for soldiers. The protagonist not only faces the survival pressure of wild beasts and food crisis, but also faces oppression and deprivation among fellow humans. What's more important is that there is still a mortal enemy of the human race in this world, a kind of cruel and murderous ape race that feeds on the human race. . See how the protagonist leads his people to unify the human race in this wild world, eliminate and defeat the ferocious enemy apes, and build the glory of human civilization on this alien continent. Welcome the reading review team to come and review! Book group 415613107 Welcome everyone to communicate
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Official(60)Scraped 7d ago
. . .
Indicates that the first person has the effect of persuading people to retreat. . . :-[
Please use third person in your next book.
This is not a question of whether you write it well or not. The third-person perspective from God's perspective does not require explanation. Also, you added too much of your own wishes rather than the thinking of the character. Am I right? 5 Nemesis is because of your persistence
first person
I don't know why the author wanted to write in the first person, but first-person novels are always awkward to read.
Not good-looking all the time
It has always been centered on the protagonist, and most of the inventions are done by me. Are you writing an otaku novel? There are at least ten of me in one chapter. Do you have no name? I broke a book
Don't like first person
It's so awesome. Let's advertise.
Please recommend, please click. For three hundred years under the bright moon, the hero will not be alone, and the beauty will remain the same. If there is an afterlife, I will dance for you on your red sleeves. I will be alone for one life, and helpless for two lives. Who said that hard work will not be repaid by man and nature? Who said that three thousand Yuejia could swallow Wu? Whoever throws away a half-pot of Huadiao and spits it out on his sleeve will be the end of youth or hero? The shadow in the cup of wine ruined three thousand pagodas of fish and geese! After surviving a hundred battles, Jian smiled and asked: Is the beauty in Guanzhong still the same? Xu Fu said, since this is happening, I will live an arrogant and domineering life so that no one can understand it. The bright moon of Qin Dynasty has been shining for three hundred years. It's time to take it off and wipe it! !
Not good at first person viewing
I'm used to seeing third person and first person, so I don't see it very well. It would be better if it was third person.
This novel is okay, but it's awkward to read.
Although the writing of this novel is okay, the novel is not about the author using the first person if he wants to. As a story about the development and struggle between two races, the first-person perspective is not comprehensive, and it is difficult to highlight the characteristics and images of other people, because after all, this is the perspective of "me", and the subjective factor of "me" is involved in viewing things, and the plot depends on communication with other people and my behavior to develop. At the same time, the author's foreshadowing is difficult to bury. He can't always say: What "I" am doing and what that person is doing. The third person has an omniscient perspective, that is, the perspective of God. The development and continuation of the story are clear at a glance, without as many restrictions and awkwardness as the first person.
I thought of the Tai Chi Heart Sutra passed down in my family, and suddenly I felt a warm current flowing through my body. . . . . . A moment of drama
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Official(60)Scraped 7d ago
. . .
Indicates that the first person has the effect of persuading people to retreat. . . :-[
Please use third person in your next book.
This is not a question of whether you write it well or not. The third-person perspective from God's perspective does not require explanation. Also, you added too much of your own wishes rather than the thinking of the character. Am I right? 5 Nemesis is because of your persistence
first person
I don't know why the author wanted to write in the first person, but first-person novels are always awkward to read.
Not good-looking all the time
It has always been centered on the protagonist, and most of the inventions are done by me. Are you writing an otaku novel? There are at least ten of me in one chapter. Do you have no name? I broke a book
Don't like first person
It's so awesome. Let's advertise.
Please recommend, please click. For three hundred years under the bright moon, the hero will not be alone, and the beauty will remain the same. If there is an afterlife, I will dance for you on your red sleeves. I will be alone for one life, and helpless for two lives. Who said that hard work will not be repaid by man and nature? Who said that three thousand Yuejia could swallow Wu? Whoever throws away a half-pot of Huadiao and spits it out on his sleeve will be the end of youth or hero? The shadow in the cup of wine ruined three thousand pagodas of fish and geese! After surviving a hundred battles, Jian smiled and asked: Is the beauty in Guanzhong still the same? Xu Fu said, since this is happening, I will live an arrogant and domineering life so that no one can understand it. The bright moon of Qin Dynasty has been shining for three hundred years. It's time to take it off and wipe it! !
Not good at first person viewing
I'm used to seeing third person and first person, so I don't see it very well. It would be better if it was third person.
This novel is okay, but it's awkward to read.
Although the writing of this novel is okay, the novel is not about the author using the first person if he wants to. As a story about the development and struggle between two races, the first-person perspective is not comprehensive, and it is difficult to highlight the characteristics and images of other people, because after all, this is the perspective of "me", and the subjective factor of "me" is involved in viewing things, and the plot depends on communication with other people and my behavior to develop. At the same time, the author's foreshadowing is difficult to bury. He can't always say: What "I" am doing and what that person is doing. The third person has an omniscient perspective, that is, the perspective of God. The development and continuation of the story are clear at a glance, without as many restrictions and awkwardness as the first person.
I thought of the Tai Chi Heart Sutra passed down in my family, and suddenly I felt a warm current flowing through my body. . . . . . A moment of drama
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