Adventurer's Journey

A goblin only costs two coins. I don't know what to think. A goblin is also dangerous to adults.

Can anyone explain to me why the protagonist worked so hard for 30 copper coins, cleaning the sewers in exchange for half a piece of bread? Do you laugh at what you wrote? Taking a shower and throwing away a silver coin? The currency collapsed at the beginning, and the author is also a talent (㊗️). Even if a teammate dies, it's okay to lick the bag with tears. After all, we only traveled through three months. I can see your thoughts about being sad and then making up your mind to become stronger, but Chun Chun's writing is not strong enough to make it look pretentious➕clown. . Make the most of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. If your writing skills are not good enough, don't bother with so many words. It's all just nonsense, which is very disappointing.

The plot is actually pretty good, it's indeed the kind of Western fantasy adventurer story you'd expect, but some parts still look very abrupt and strange. There is often dialogue in that dramatic form. It looks like a stage play... It looks very dramatic. Then the system skills and levels. Although it is indeed possible for low-level adventurers to leapfrog and kill high-level adventurers. But it's a bit too much for a lv1 and lv2 professional to fight back and forth with lv4 and 5 instead of being instantly killed. Obviously, it is difficult for the protagonist to improve his skill proficiency from 0-1 in the process. In this way, there should be a big gap in proficiency and combat experience between each level. How could it be possible to be entangled or find flaws? The second is that the skill effect is described as a dice-throwing point bonus like a real-life game or tabletop game DND. As a result, it has nothing to do with it in the plot battle, and it looks a bit puzzling. It's better to just say how many percent the increase is...

I have been reading for a long time about where some of the skills are. The reality in the book is not set like the game. You cannot roll or hit people with the hilt of a sword without using skills. What is the point of just adding a little 5% to the skills in the early stage? The attributes have also increased a little bit, and I can't see the improvement in the character's strength. After reading for a long time, except for two more spells, what is the difference from the beginning? This kind of European and American fantasy character's strength improvement is really impressive in the novel. The character's strength is very high. At first glance, he looks like a pitchfork farmer who knows some martial arts.

The level setting is very unreasonable, and the skill level is almost meaningless. He has skills that are not even level 1, and has the same physical fitness as a civilian. He has defeated powerful enemies continuously. There is no data to support that he can continuously challenge the God of Choice and the Orc Chief. It can be said that it is better not to set up a system.

It is a niche Western fantasy adventure novel. I like it a lot, but I find it boring if I don't like it. After reading about thirty pictures, I can see that the author wants to shape the protagonist into a qualified warrior or even a hero. However, in the two battles with kobolds and orcs, the author did not cheat and the protagonist died long ago. What is the point of adventure? She is totally looking for death. When faced with an invincible opponent, she chooses to fight instead of running. I like it and think it's cool, but I think it's very baffling. Moreover, the protagonist of Thirty Pictures has done this twice.

It's really ordinary, please be a time traveler after all. In the early stage, there was no real person and no one said anything, but isn't it ridiculous that you don't even have basic self-control and educational thinking? Ruins information is not money? Do you have to take risks when you don't have any strength? Why didn't he run all the way to the ground and then stop when he ran first? Taking risks is not just risking your life blindly, right? It's true to seek wealth and wealth through insurance, but if you hit a mouse, there is a risk of overturning the car. Is it because you want to seek wealth because you don't want to die fast enough?

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The title of the book is deceptive. The core is the traditional story of the Virgin Mary. It is a bit old-fashioned and the performance is a bit obvious. It is not that the story is bad, it is also a bit strange, but it also feels like the protagonist's character is broken because of the title of the book.