Killing Demons from All Realms

The protagonist is in a bad mood. On the one hand, he says that he is too poor to eat. On the other hand, the girl buys him a mountain king for free, and helps others to get rid of ghosts for free. It's okay if you can just be a virgin, but the key is not a virgin. The character is not set well, and there is no power that a strong person should have. I feel that the modern writing is also nonsense. What is the concept of fighting a mountain king head-on? If it were really modern, this girl's brother would directly treat you as an ancestor, and this classmate would have shamelessly asked to be accepted as a disciple. The protagonist's concept of evil is also very vague. For example, Zhongyi Hall wants to force the protagonist to come out, so he just kills the little girl with a knife, but the protagonist just wants a small punishment and it will be over. For example, the ghost who died after being humiliated and wronged was beaten to the point of death by the protagonist because he was a ghost and because he wanted revenge, but the parents killed his two children just for money, but the protagonist did not kill him and was still reasonable, and in modern times, people who have never seen ghosts are seeing ghosts. At that time, he was as calm as when he saw it every day. The lower-level personnel of Zongyi Hall were killing and killing ordinary people. The protagonist also worked as a bodyguard for the young master of Zhongyi Hall. He was stronger than other hall masters and even competed with other hall masters' daughters. Is it not possible for a force like Zhongyi Hall to directly force him to hand over the caravan? You, the one with the invisibility charm, can't enter Fangcheng? In modern times, you fight a mountain king head-on, which is still three meters high, and you kill a ghost in front of your classmate's brother. As a result, his brother doesn't take you seriously, and treats you like a piece of shit. I wonder if you are a fake Taoist with real ability. Others value you, but you, a real expert who can kill a mountain king, don't take you seriously. Even if you kill ghosts in front of him, he doesn't take you seriously. In modern times, do you know what it means for others to know that you have the means to cultivate immortality? The most annoying thing is the character and character of the protagonist, as well as the judgment of evil. If someone wants to kill someone in front of you but you stop him, and then you punish him a little, why do you think that if you punish him a little, others will correct him? I can't understand the protagonist's strength, it's very vague, and it's just random writing. 1. The protagonist can escape from the spider demon when he is incapacitated. I assume that the protagonist's physical fitness is 2.0 (500 Pounds), which is not too much, right? When you are breathing, you are said to be several times stronger. So the physical fitness of 8.0 (Two thousand pounds) is not too much, right? When the rabbit demon rescued him, he gave him the inner elixir. The protagonist said that he was ten times stronger. So, the physical fitness of 80.0 (20,000 Pounds) is not too much, right? Then even if the giant strength is five times 400.0 (One hundred thousand catties), this skill can be enhanced with mana. Even if it is 1000.0 (Two hundred and twenty-five thousand catties), it is not too much, right? So I would like to ask why the protagonist can't outrun the horse and still needs to use talismans. Why can he still fight with a warrior back and forth and still have to fight? Moreover, this warrior is not very strong, he only knows how to use concealed weapons. What's the concept? He can already break the speed of sound. Catching a few monsters and ghosts to death is no different.

The characters and the story are so well connected...

The author doesn't know what he is portraying. He says that the protagonist is cowardly. He grins every time afterwards. He says that the protagonist is smart. The spells are not long remembered after several times. They are a bunch of stupid people. They abandoned the book. The writing is too poor.

Did you copy the Seventy-Two Transformations of Disha? I hope it was better written. That book was too slow.

There are big problems with the character creation, and the sense of déjà vu is too strong. It doesn't matter if you say I copied it at the beginning, but there are still a lot of similarities later on, and some parts are changed to be nondescript. It depends on your personal taste.

If you have money, don't pretend to be aloof! No brains

After reading two chapters, it should be the Seventy-Two Transformations of Earthly Evil, but I hope you can move faster and don't imitate the original author????????????????????????????

After reading two chapters, it should be the Seventy-Two Transformations of Earthly Evil, but I hope you can move faster and don't imitate the original author????????????????????????????

😘As Baimu said, set up a sign-in building. If you have nothing to do, you can come and sign in.

Didn't the author realize that in recent years, books with female protagonists have become less popular? Especially in the fantasy genre, when the woman is not in the story, it looks good, but when the woman is in the story, it becomes a bit jarring. You haven't written clearly how you met that woman, but you suddenly had such a good relationship with someone who sat next to you on the train? You should be single too. Stop dreaming. Even novels can't develop so fast.