Rule the Heavens from Eternity On

Fang Qingxue, the Lightning Mother Heavenly Lord, a reincarnated being who opens the door to eternal life through the back door. She fell in love with the protagonist just because of a few eloquent words. Fang Qingxue's character completely collapsed.

No, author, if you don't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't write them. What are you writing about? I only met him once, and I fell in love with him after saying a few sweet words. Mingyue aside, Fang Qingxue's character has completely collapsed. I think this emotional drama will have to dissuade many people.

Real ink marks, born in the world of eternal life and still grinding away in the small world, Feng Yun wrote it until it was put on the shelves, it was funny, the water was so cruel

The strength increased too fast and it collapsed! More than two hundred chapters have gone to the fairy world, and there are only three world travels. If I go to cover the sky again, I don't know what the point is. There are also emotional scenes, you don't have to write them if you don't know how to write them, Fang Qingxue's character is completely ruined!

Too much nonsense, the protagonist is mentally ill

** What a mess, what kind of writing did Fang Qingxue look like, and what the hell did you open up such a huge chapter to the world of wind and cloud, dozens of chapters,

No one dared to kill, and the enemy was easily let go every time. It also includes the Seven Nights Demon King, and other plots are copied from the original work, which is very poisonous.

What I wrote at the beginning was okay, but the more I wrote, the more rubbish I got.

There are really few fans of Eternal Life.

The rating is 6.9 Which is too high. What the hell are you writing?