Small World of Heavens
About This Novel
Spiritual energy revives and the world is in danger "Here I come, I have a body of steel, Iron-Headed Boy!" Lin Yang: "I have a small world" "I will come again. I have wings of wind and thunder, and I will take off from Wuhu!" Lin Yang: "I have a small world!" "Here I go again, I am powerful and powerful, Golden Wheel of Muscles!" Lin Yang drooled looking at those muscles, "I love this, I love it!"
What Readers Think
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Official(11)Scraped 16d ago
I don't know if it's a problem with the author's upload or a problem with the website_?
Chapter 179 is followed by the previous chapters. No follow-up?
The second one is enough for me too
There must be some people in your book who won't even read the second picture.
It feels like playing a single player game.
It feels like the protagonist is playing a stand-alone game with no sense of immersion at all.
What you want is this feeling, fast pace.
I would like to give some suggestions. It is best to write less in the main world, and it is best to maintain the current speed, because if it slows down, if you look at the front so fast and then suddenly slow down at the back, it will not be so beautiful. At most, it will slowly settle down at the end.
The protagonist can't learn from each other's strengths, so why travel back and forth? It's just for faith. It's really annoying.
No beginning or end!
The world I write about is too boring, like a running account, with no beginning or end. Many of them are not explained clearly and are just brushed off. The author's ideas are still good, but his writing style is not good and he cannot express what he wants to express. It looks so messy. Sometimes inexplicably.
It was okay in the early stage, but it was not good after it was put on the shelves.
The introduction is a cool article, and it was really good before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, I started to write down the numbers. One action describes half a day, and there are various metaphors. A female ghost has to kill for two or three chapters. The number of words has a great impact on the quality.
Really bad
Each world is written from beginning to end!
The content is okay
It's just that this book has too many typos and some of the content is inconsistent, making it uncomfortable to read.
Thank you for the reward that I only read book reviews. Thank you to all book friends for your support. Thank you.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 16d ago
I don't know if it's a problem with the author's upload or a problem with the website_?
Chapter 179 is followed by the previous chapters. No follow-up?
The second one is enough for me too
There must be some people in your book who won't even read the second picture.
It feels like playing a single player game.
It feels like the protagonist is playing a stand-alone game with no sense of immersion at all.
What you want is this feeling, fast pace.
I would like to give some suggestions. It is best to write less in the main world, and it is best to maintain the current speed, because if it slows down, if you look at the front so fast and then suddenly slow down at the back, it will not be so beautiful. At most, it will slowly settle down at the end.
The protagonist can't learn from each other's strengths, so why travel back and forth? It's just for faith. It's really annoying.
No beginning or end!
The world I write about is too boring, like a running account, with no beginning or end. Many of them are not explained clearly and are just brushed off. The author's ideas are still good, but his writing style is not good and he cannot express what he wants to express. It looks so messy. Sometimes inexplicably.
It was okay in the early stage, but it was not good after it was put on the shelves.
The introduction is a cool article, and it was really good before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, I started to write down the numbers. One action describes half a day, and there are various metaphors. A female ghost has to kill for two or three chapters. The number of words has a great impact on the quality.
Really bad
Each world is written from beginning to end!
The content is okay
It's just that this book has too many typos and some of the content is inconsistent, making it uncomfortable to read.
Thank you for the reward that I only read book reviews. Thank you to all book friends for your support. Thank you.
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