Mystical Resurrection: Creation of the Underworld

This book has written more than 200,000 words, but it only has 800 bookshelves and more than 100 book friends. In fact, it can be seen that it is just a pity to abandon it because it is tasteless. Why do you say this? Because in fact, there are some writing problems, and this kind of problem can be seen by book friends. Yes, but the author couldn't find it himself. If I change it, I believe more people will read it. For example, when the protagonist went to No. 7 Middle School to fight the knocker, he said that he could not suppress the knocker. You must know that at this time, the protagonist's ghost already had 5 suppression places, and when he went to No. 7 Middle School for evening self-study The Knocker has been dismembered by Luo Wensong. There are at most 3 ghosts in it. How could it not be suppressed? However, when you write this, the ghosts of opening doors, closing doors, turning on lights and turning off the lights are still on the Knocker. I can tell you clearly that these ghosts have been dismembered long ago and are not on it at all. You will also say later The ghosts of the ghosts are no better than the ghosts at this time. Do you think it is possible? You must know that in the early days, Yang Jian could break through the ghosts, but he had to be trapped and died in the ghosts. This guy is the original ghost. The ghosts are much better than the ghosts. The above examples are consistent with the original work. It's completely different. If you want to make it come true, then you have to create a second version of the fanfic, or it's completely messed up. If these are modified, more people will read it. Otherwise, these problems are enough to make many people abandon it. There is also the ghost of the protagonist's seal being copied, and the ghost saying that he is afraid of copying. They are too powerful and out of control, so they dare not develop clones of Ghosts and Starving Ghosts. In fact, it can be seen that this is suppressing the protagonist's combat power. According to the priority of the rules, if the copied Ghosts and Starving Ghosts become stronger, then the Seal Ghosts that are copied from them will also become stronger because of them. There is no such thing. When the clones are out of the control of the Seal Ghost, you might as well be afraid that they will become stronger. The Seal Ghost will soon revive as it becomes stronger and wreak havoc on the world with its ghosts, so it dare not develop wildly. In addition to the above problems, there are some other problems that I will not give examples. If these problems are not repaired, I am 100% dissuading a large number of book friends, and these problems are exactly what we book friends can see and think are poisonous points, but the author is invisible to the authorities, so don't delete my review. I pointed it out to make you write better, not to criticize you, otherwise I wouldn't give 5 stars.

What did the author write? The characteristic of ghosts is suppression, and the characteristics of starving ghosts are curses. The protagonist can make the ghost slaves of starving ghosts eat and become invincible, and he will not be affected. Operation process: The ghost seal copies ghosts and starving ghosts, and copies countless paper figures to become ghost slaves. Countless ghost slaves eat the copies of ghosts. According to the original text, the number of ghost slaves to suppress is ten, so there are countless ghost slaves with ghost characteristics in the fourth stage. In the last step, countless ghost slaves eat each other to improve the curse and suppress the characteristics until the last ghost slave. Because the ghost slave is controlled by the hungry ghost, the protagonist does not have any negative effects. The rules of this ghost slave at this time: Curse characteristics are starving ghosts × n + suppressive characteristics are ghosts × n With such intensity, Zhang Dong called him "good guy" when he came.

It's still very good, recommended

I saw that the protagonist survived in the end.