
Mortal: I Follow My Heart
by A Weak Chicken Will Go Against The Will Of Heaven
About This Novel
Fang Yu traveled through time and space to the mortal world. Full of understanding points, invincible fighting power. Accompanying the world of mortals, accompanying beautiful people, this is my story...
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Official(21)Scraped 2d ago
Please don't include emotional scenes in your fairy tales
Another article about corpse-picking Chen Qiaoqian's love-minded article. The article about cultivating immortals is written as a love story. I'm speechless. I don't know what other people think. The most annoying among mortals is Chen Qiaoqian. Everyone else is dedicated to cultivating immortals regardless of their character. Only this woman is like an idiot. She has qualifications and family background but doesn't cherish them. She only wants to fall in love. I'm convinced. Fortunately, Han Li didn't want her.
The plot became a bit ridiculous. In the original book, Heisha coached the skills brought by Ji Xuan, which had nothing to do with the demonic Hehuan Sect. The plot felt a bit forced. I feel that the protagonist is inexplicable. He has such qualifications but does not work hard to improve his level. He does this and that all day long, as if he is looking for death.
Very well written. That's why the protagonist wants to accept this Chen Qiaoqian. It's really disgusting. Pure love brain oil bottle. He was being hunted, people were rescuing him, he was doing this and that. This impure person has found trouble in the mortal world.
By the way, didn't you kill the young master in Hehuan? Why didn't I see you take his storage bag? And I don't see anything awesome about you. He is the young master of Hehuan, and his net worth must be very rich.
It's disgusting, the plot doesn't make sense
Does it have to be a girl? How can a mortal write about emotions?
Nowadays, romance novel plots have also begun to be written in novels about cultivating immortals.
So speechless
9 of the ten fics are related to Chen Qiaoqian or the three beauties of Mofu. When I started reading it, I thought it was pretty good without being related to Mofu, but then there was another Chen Qiaoqian, which was really disgusting. If you want to open a harem, wouldn't it be Xin Ruyin or Nangong Wan? Which one is better than Chen Qiaoqian, a burden? Which one is not more useful than Chen Qiaoqian? If it doesn't work, Ling Yuling can do it.
The name is not very good, but the writing is very good. The protagonist's character is well developed. He grew up slowly from being beaten as a beggar to learning a craft. His character also changed from timid and cowardly to full of courage. It all depends on your own efforts and accumulation step by step. Don't do anything beyond the scope of your abilities. Even the crisis in the Bloody Forbidden Land is unexpected but reasonable. When you suddenly encounter the monks in the pill-forming stage later, you only fight with confidence. This mortal has been outdone by you. Keep up the good work, update five times a day and don't be lazy!
A little ruthless but very idealistic
There's really nothing interesting to write about. It's purely mindless and illogical. I can't stand it anymore.
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Official(21)Scraped 2d ago
Please don't include emotional scenes in your fairy tales
Another article about corpse-picking Chen Qiaoqian's love-minded article. The article about cultivating immortals is written as a love story. I'm speechless. I don't know what other people think. The most annoying among mortals is Chen Qiaoqian. Everyone else is dedicated to cultivating immortals regardless of their character. Only this woman is like an idiot. She has qualifications and family background but doesn't cherish them. She only wants to fall in love. I'm convinced. Fortunately, Han Li didn't want her.
The plot became a bit ridiculous. In the original book, Heisha coached the skills brought by Ji Xuan, which had nothing to do with the demonic Hehuan Sect. The plot felt a bit forced. I feel that the protagonist is inexplicable. He has such qualifications but does not work hard to improve his level. He does this and that all day long, as if he is looking for death.
Very well written. That's why the protagonist wants to accept this Chen Qiaoqian. It's really disgusting. Pure love brain oil bottle. He was being hunted, people were rescuing him, he was doing this and that. This impure person has found trouble in the mortal world.
By the way, didn't you kill the young master in Hehuan? Why didn't I see you take his storage bag? And I don't see anything awesome about you. He is the young master of Hehuan, and his net worth must be very rich.
It's disgusting, the plot doesn't make sense
Does it have to be a girl? How can a mortal write about emotions?
Nowadays, romance novel plots have also begun to be written in novels about cultivating immortals.
So speechless
9 of the ten fics are related to Chen Qiaoqian or the three beauties of Mofu. When I started reading it, I thought it was pretty good without being related to Mofu, but then there was another Chen Qiaoqian, which was really disgusting. If you want to open a harem, wouldn't it be Xin Ruyin or Nangong Wan? Which one is better than Chen Qiaoqian, a burden? Which one is not more useful than Chen Qiaoqian? If it doesn't work, Ling Yuling can do it.
The name is not very good, but the writing is very good. The protagonist's character is well developed. He grew up slowly from being beaten as a beggar to learning a craft. His character also changed from timid and cowardly to full of courage. It all depends on your own efforts and accumulation step by step. Don't do anything beyond the scope of your abilities. Even the crisis in the Bloody Forbidden Land is unexpected but reasonable. When you suddenly encounter the monks in the pill-forming stage later, you only fight with confidence. This mortal has been outdone by you. Keep up the good work, update five times a day and don't be lazy!
A little ruthless but very idealistic
There's really nothing interesting to write about. It's purely mindless and illogical. I can't stand it anymore.













