Path of Evolution

Those who were attracted by the author's name raised their hands.

No heroine! ! ! ! !

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1-Foreword: It's a very interesting book... I couldn't bear to finish it... I think it fulfilled my childhood dream. This can be regarded as my childhood memory, a book I read when I was a child. When I was young, reading this book was really novel. I was in my early ten years at that time, and the terms "evolution", "gene lock" and "nine heavens of a seed" were very attractive to children. Although I don't know why I didn't finish it when I was a child... I suddenly remembered this book some time ago, so I picked it up and read it again. The first part of this book was really fascinating (from my personal perspective as a child), but now it seems just so-so. Two-Questions: 1. After seeing chapters 2-300, you are completely brainless... Everyone is forced to be wise. Yes, everyone, good or bad. Can you imagine that the elite children of the four major families, the biological children of the second-level demon king, and the first disciples of the new generation of the best sect in the world are all the rz Tang family? 2. The "Olympic spirit" comes again and again. It's not that the Olympic spirit is not good, it's just that the author can only write this word to describe the protagonist's perseverance. I can still understand the first and second levels when you talk about the Olympics. The third and fourth levels are always in seclusion for hundreds of years. If you pick one at random, can't the willpower be as good as the human Olympic spirit? The whole description in this book is full of Olympic spirit, it is purely funny, there are no replacement words, and I like to use this to highlight the characteristics of the protagonist. I don't know what I think. Similar repeated emphasis is on "Advanced Mathematics" and in the last few chapters, "Olympic Rings" appear hundreds of millions of times. 3. Show English. For example, "very much", and a few nouns that pop up from time to time. It looks like a piece of writing written by a middle school or high school student, and it feels like you have learned something and showed it off. 4. Nervous way of communication. Excellent books naturally lead to conflicts along with the plot. This book chops off the characters' brains and uses mindless dialogue to lead to conflicts. It can be boldly said that more than 50% of the plot conflicts are completely unnecessary and can be eliminated with explanation. However, the author chopped off the characters' brains and forced the war to start with full-sugar dialogue. 5. The protagonist is quite rz quite 🐢turtle. It can be classified together with the previous question, because in the first 600 chapters, when it comes to conflicts caused by mindless conflicts, the protagonist must not explain or speak at all, and swallow his anger. It made me feel angry. He was obviously aggrieved, but he just sat back and watched the matter get bigger and bigger, and even ordinary people could get into trouble. The only time I finally felt better was when I slaughtered the Hua family. 6. Harem. In fact, this is not a problem. Books in the early years all liked harems. What I want to point out here is: Anyone who has been described will definitely be fucked. The first and second levels are fine, but after the third level, it is really unreadable. The described girl has a 100% harem rate, is that a spoiler? 7. The way the protagonist and his old friends become stronger is quite abstract. This still refers to old friends after the third level (all members of the protagonist group suddenly become stronger), as well as the eternally abstract protagonist. Opportunity is always present wherever the protagonist of any book goes. But this book just does what it takes to make most opportunities seem too abrupt. I don't fully understand the feeling of slowly getting stronger. I even think that giving the protagonist's gene lock and opportunity to anyone who sincerely practices can kill the current protagonist. The only achievement that the protagonist has achieved is the Nine Heavens Kung Fu. However, when writing about the Nine Heavens Evolution Technique, the author obviously does not describe it in detail. He only "brings into play the Olympic spirit". He persists and then directly learns the ultimate Kung Fu. To be honest, this kid has become stronger. The readers are confused after reading this. They feel that this kind of fun can become stronger purely because of the author's arrangement rather than the character's own efforts. These questions are never resolved from the beginning to the finale. Three-Miscellaneous talk: When I first saw it, it was supposed to be junior high school? Or elementary school? Forgot. I thought this book was my "good childhood memory". When I just recalled this book a few days ago, I was still curious about why I was not short of money when I was a child (In fact, I used the New Year's money to read books... I usually don't give pocket money... I don't use the New Year's money to read novels instead of the king, haha) When I was a kid, I didn't want to spend money reading novels, so why didn't I finish them when I was a kid? ? I finally finished reading this early this morning, and when I opened the book review section to comment, I realized that I had already given negative reviews when I was a child. I had been disgusted and dismissed it a long, long time ago... After reading the entire book, I discovered that the white moonlight was actually the black moonlight. I didn't write about the advantages, because the only thing that attracted me about this book was the new vocabulary from my childhood, but now it's 2024, and what was once a trend is now a bad thing. I hope this book review can help you avoid pitfalls, and I hope the fun at the end can make you happy. 2024/8.14/4:34 (Early morning) Second edition on 2024/12.10/1:25, Corrected some typos ps doesn't use QQ to read anymore, so the nickname avatar is still that of a kid from a long time ago.

Obviously the previous writing is very good, very passionate and interesting, but when it comes to returning to the earth, the number of words is very low, but this woman, that woman, can't write anymore? It seems very uncomfortable when I write this. I was so infatuated at the beginning, but my character immediately turned into a stallion later. I would mess with this girl, flirt with that girl, and I would be really drunk.

Now that I mentioned that there is no heroine, don't write about a heroine. If you write it, I'll take it very seriously. I'm quite happy eating dog food, but then you suddenly feed me a mouthful of shit. I'm really pissed off. Really, the feeling after the death of the heroine is not good. If you are going to re-draw the heroine, can you give me some tips? My understanding is too poor to understand your intention. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Bad review, bad review, bad review......... I read novels to relax, not to take drugs............

Yesterday I went to my brother's house and saw my sister-in-law, who has always been good-tempered, violently beating her 4-year-old nephew. When I asked the truth, I laughed like crazy. My sister-in-law came home early and saw a maddening scene: my nephew pooped in the living room, and then fed it to the dog one spoonful at a time. This had been going on for more than a month. And the first thing my sister-in-law does when she comes home from get off work every day is to pick up the puppy and give it a kiss.

The early stages are good. Very good! There is no need to watch it after the heroine dies. Poison

The main reason is that the main character is too 2B, and it's annoying to look at this funny type of main character now. . .

I feel like the protagonist is a fool. A woman is about to die trying to save him. He just leaves without caring about her life or death. He goes around trying to trick people, including villains, even those who help him. He also says that he likes the female protagonist very much. When the female protagonist dies, he casually feels sad and chats with others. In summary, the male protagonist is very cheap.