Infinite Different Dimension Chat Group

First of all, telling the fate of the group members through the protagonist's mouth makes the readers (at least myself) feel super awkward. I think it would be better to have a mechanism for the group members to understand themselves. Although this method has been used by many authors, it has good results. Then, the protagonist's behavior is helpful, such as giving away the antidote to Thousand Machine Poison, such as solving the problem of Xiao Yan's stagnant cultivation due to the old medicine. I don't know about others, but I think it is very weird. Solving a problem that is known to be solved in the future feels a bit... It's superfluous, and it feels like the protagonist is forcing himself to find something to do. Moreover, a saint saving a person who is not even an immortal has a lot of words, which is too embarrassing. If you say something like "there must be a road before the mountain", wouldn't it show the strong demeanor even more? Third, at the beginning of the chapter, I remember the protagonist said something like "How should we go after the saint?" You are already a person looking out from the top of the mountain. Do you feel the loneliness of being a strong person? It is that kind of "floating, independent and independent" feeling. Anyway, I didn't feel it, either I read too little, or my literary talent is not enough, or because the author is a novice. Finally, if the author writes the book for himself, then you have to finish the road you choose on your knees (the implication is that you don't want to be a eunuch, because this is your debut, shouldn't you finish it with your heart?), What I say is only what I say after all, and it is very subjective. If you want to change it, it will be better next time.

It's well written in Douluo Continent. With the most accurate physical rules, it turns out that the fine iron on Douluo Continent only weighs a few hundred kilograms, while the fine iron on Earth's side weighs at least seven to eight tons, which is 14,000 kilograms to 16,000 kilograms. The density is dozens of times different. No wonder the Haotian Hammer is as big as several kilograms.

Not many people have read this book!

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Updates are a bit slow, only one chapter a day, which is not enough to read.