I Open a Black Shop in Zhutian

I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. I went to Zhutian to get something in exchange for a woman.

Your book is about the flow of all heavens. But when you write about the urban world, I still hope that you will write a good plot, but if you are naked and pick up girls, you are really stupid.

If you have any worlds you want to see, just write them down in this post and I'll take a look.

There is no real character. If you want a woman, you just want a woman. It's too cheap. You might as well stop writing it. It's a noob.

Take a quick look. It seems to have no beginning or end. The last chapter is still in the world of bad people and it hasn't ended yet. Then I immediately started writing a new world. Writing a book should at least be better connected.

It is speechless to write about bad people like this. Qiaoer becomes a surrender? Li Xingyun has gone down the mountain, and Emperor Hades hasn't reached the throne of heaven yet? The Ghost King hasn't been imprisoned yet?

The highlight of this genre is that the originally solidified characters begin to rewrite the story due to their transactions with the protagonist. But if an invincible and spoiler-type protagonist is added to this situation, what is the point of this book? ? This book gave me the feeling of two very different movies playing in one cinema. It tortures the viewer from the inside out.

There's a problem with the first chapter, isn't it about time travel? How can I still order martial arts secrets from the real world?

This book is really rubbish. The promised store. Don't know how to use the store well. He always fights with his own life. I'm not that awesome either.

At the end of the Tang Dynasty, let's see the handsome man.