Yuan Zun's Opening Sign and the Sky Poison Pearl

Yuan Zun's Opening Sign and the Sky Poison Pearl

by It's Cloud Leaves

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About This Novel

The protagonist, Han Feng, was originally just an ordinary social beast in Blue Star, but one day while walking on the road, he suddenly felt dizzy. After that, he traveled to the world of Yuan Zun and obtained a god-level sign-in system. Let's see how the protagonist stirs up troubles here and achieves his own story.

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Book Friends 20241004593_bd12mo ago

Author, you should update it. Only a few chapters are not enough.

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The Bright Moon Shines on My Shadow☆13mo ago

Author, are you not updating?

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No Worries, No Inscriptions9mo ago

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The Bright Moon Shines on My Shadow☆13mo ago

Also, it is better not to have too many female protagonists, 2-3, such as Wu Yao, Su Youwei, and Yaoyao. Or give Yaoyao to Zhou Yuan, or take Li Qingchan. I have read other comics and felt that their appearance is not that good. Although Su Youwei is not very good in my opinion, but the author has already started to let the protagonist meet Su Youwei and it would not be good if you don't accept it.

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The Bright Moon Shines on My Shadow☆13mo ago

I hope the rewards in your system, the author, can't be too exaggerated. Look at the treasures you give, each one becomes more exaggerated than the last. I think this system should also help the protagonist grow and become stronger with the help of the system, rather than the protagonist relying on the system for everything and being nothing without the system. Moreover, the things given by the system cannot be given for free. For example, the protagonist should be given after completing certain tasks, and the things given should be in line with the protagonist's realm.

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The Bright Moon Shines on My Shadow☆13mo ago

I hope that the heroine you write will help each other, grow together, and face enemies together with the protagonist. After all, this is the definition of a partner. I don't know when fantasy novels like this started to show that men and women are completely dependent on each other.

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The Bright Moon Shines on My Shadow☆13mo ago

The author thinks this system is set up so that the protagonist travels from another world and becomes something like a green lotus (with extraordinary heels and great talent, but no strength) and meets the protagonist when Zulong opens up Tianyuan Realm. Zulong predicts what the Holy God will do to Tianyuan Realm in the future. Zulong specifically asks the protagonist to take care of Tianyuan Realm and Yaoyao, and the Eastern and Western protagonists are not high enough to specifically give this system to help the protagonist grow. The protagonist fell into a deep sleep for some reason and slept until the beginning of the plot.

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