The Mountain Gate Was Surrounded and My Disciple Turned Black
by Uncle Keimu
About This Novel
Because he took in the remnants of the royal family, Su Changcun was ordered to die by the Holy Lord. If he didn't obey..., He would be killed at the mountain gate in seven days and massacre the clan and destroy the sect! Who knows, Su Changcun activated the blackening system! [Your disciple Li Qianqiu witnessed you taking the Forbidden Spirit Pill and successfully turning into a black man..., Gaining a hundredfold increase in cultivation speed, your talent turning danger into safety, and inspiring personality slaughter! [Your mountain gate found that you were too rubbish, was stabbed by someone, and successfully turned black..., Developed self-protection ability, obtained Shura's birth, blood dragon suppressed the mountain, and perished due to negative effects! [Your big yellow dog is so angry that it turns black successfully... And obtains the true body of the Black Emperor, the Emperor's Divine Weapon, and is bloodbathed with negative effects! On that day, the emperor's decree had arrived... Wang Ting ascended to great power, and came to Xuanming Sect with millions of soldiers and armor! That day, Su Changcun sat in front of the mountain gate and died generously! That day... Black demonic energy enveloped the entire Qingming Mountain... You could faintly hear the rippling demonic voices of the ancient gods, and countless evil figures covered the sky! Ps: If you have read the new book, you can read the old book "Activating the Background System at the Start", "Landing into the Ancient World 20,000 Years in Advance", "My Son Became a Villain Licking Dog", "One Year After Divorce, I Married My Ex-Wife's Best Friend"
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Official(151)Scraped 6d ago
The reason why I gave it 3 points
As a former strong man in the Golden Core stage, although he has become a mortal, although he cannot feel the aura of other strong men, he can still see it! Are you afraid that your life of cultivating immortality has been in vain for decades, and as the protagonist has a golden finger, the protagonist himself is still a mortal? You let us watch the supporting characters show off, and the author is still young, but come on, I hope to make the protagonist a little more mature, and then quickly let the protagonist master the golden finger by himself🤧🤧🤧 There is another mistake, that is, as a sect that almost became a first-class sect, starting from the first generation of head, the others are garbage? How is it possible that you can't write about tens of thousands of years when it's only a thousand years? Oh, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง🙃🙃🙃🙃
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Doesn't the protagonist have any experience or IQ after living for decades?
I was speechless just looking at it. The protagonist is dozens of years old, with basically zero experience and IQ. The whole world knows about it, but the protagonist himself does not.
The protagonist's personality has changed drastically, from a little sheep to an old fox, and the witch has become a licker. None of the disciples are normal, and the system doesn't know if the protagonist has noticed it. Anyway, the writing is so chaotic that it has already collapsed.
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It was originally good, but it was completely ruined by the scene where the mythical beast saves the woman.
Very good, but the update is very slow, it needs to be speeded up
It can be faster, the protagonist can change back
This ad is so disgusting
It's okay if you just put it on a separate page. Now it's all under each page. It's disgusting.
Why is it that after reading three books by the author, all the latter ones are poorly written? The ending doesn't work?
Good guy, all three books are terrible. . .
Rubbish
What the hell? The front and back of the book are just nonsense. Well, I even quit and checked to see if I had opened the wrong novel. What kind of novel was invincible before resurrecting, and then turned into a retarded novel instantly after resurrection?
,,
After resurrection, it feels like a big boss has taken away his body. Before resurrection, he was just a golden elixir, a bunch of rubbish! Too inconsiderate
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Official(151)Scraped 6d ago
The reason why I gave it 3 points
As a former strong man in the Golden Core stage, although he has become a mortal, although he cannot feel the aura of other strong men, he can still see it! Are you afraid that your life of cultivating immortality has been in vain for decades, and as the protagonist has a golden finger, the protagonist himself is still a mortal? You let us watch the supporting characters show off, and the author is still young, but come on, I hope to make the protagonist a little more mature, and then quickly let the protagonist master the golden finger by himself🤧🤧🤧 There is another mistake, that is, as a sect that almost became a first-class sect, starting from the first generation of head, the others are garbage? How is it possible that you can't write about tens of thousands of years when it's only a thousand years? Oh, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง🙃🙃🙃🙃
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Doesn't the protagonist have any experience or IQ after living for decades?
I was speechless just looking at it. The protagonist is dozens of years old, with basically zero experience and IQ. The whole world knows about it, but the protagonist himself does not.
The protagonist's personality has changed drastically, from a little sheep to an old fox, and the witch has become a licker. None of the disciples are normal, and the system doesn't know if the protagonist has noticed it. Anyway, the writing is so chaotic that it has already collapsed.
...
It was originally good, but it was completely ruined by the scene where the mythical beast saves the woman.
Very good, but the update is very slow, it needs to be speeded up
It can be faster, the protagonist can change back
This ad is so disgusting
It's okay if you just put it on a separate page. Now it's all under each page. It's disgusting.
Why is it that after reading three books by the author, all the latter ones are poorly written? The ending doesn't work?
Good guy, all three books are terrible. . .
Rubbish
What the hell? The front and back of the book are just nonsense. Well, I even quit and checked to see if I had opened the wrong novel. What kind of novel was invincible before resurrecting, and then turned into a retarded novel instantly after resurrection?
,,
After resurrection, it feels like a big boss has taken away his body. Before resurrection, he was just a golden elixir, a bunch of rubbish! Too inconsiderate
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