Dou Po: Emperor Yan from the Great Thousand Worlds

The early settings were not very good. Geniuses from the great clans of the world have no fighting skills. The ones who came last time were from the Fire Spirit Clan. They must have soul skills. Even if they are destroyed by space cracks, they must still have memories. In addition, do you have to change with Xiao Yan? The method of changing poison pills in the first place can be said to be for the little medical fairy, but it will not be appropriate if you change it later. There is also the alchemy skill. Will the old medicine master be awesome in the whole battle? Will he not give the protagonist an ancient alchemist inheritance? There is also a three-year waste period. This setting is the most poisonous. Do you have to compete with Xiao Yan for opportunities at the same time? Wouldn't it be possible if we were separated from Xiao Yan? The protagonist's skills are very impressive, but they are not reflected. He also needs to absorb the strange fire. Then it is a battle of great ways with Xiao Yan. There is no need to spend too much pen and ink writing about Xiao Yan. Your book is the protagonist. If Xiao Yan is robbed of the opportunity later, he still keeps up with his cultivation, or the author uses some destiny child to arrange an opportunity for Xiao Yan, then there is no need to play. Depending on the situation, the author is writing multiple female protagonists. I hope I hope you don't become a stud. There is no need to be ambiguous with those who have absolutely no nurturing value (like Yafei). The protagonist will eventually go to the world. Those who have no nurturing value are of no use. They are just burdensome vases. Three or four heroines are enough. This is just my suggestion. I hope the author will look at the situation and arrange whatever opportunities are needed. Don't spend too much money on Xiao Yan. The one you write is the protagonist. Xiao Yan can be downplayed. Samsung encourages it.

What should we do? Didn't we say we should crack down on piracy?

The protagonist comes from the vast world and is a genius of the Fire Spirit Clan. Doesn't he have anything to save his life? He still has to fight with Yao Laoxu and Weishi.

You've been taken advantage of, and what you wrote is really rubbish.

Is there only one update per day? Can there be more updates?

The subject matter is good, but your writing is not very good, and I am trying to persuade you to quit after four chapters. ,

The writing is quite good, as long as the backend is not too studded, and it is good not to add many female supporting characters to the harem, there are Yunyun, Medusa, and the little medical fairy (Zi Yan, Yafei), but there are not many female supporting characters, and the essence is not too much. Also, if you have already written about snatching strange fires and opportunities, you should not be merciful to Xiao Yan. If you want to impose some opportunities on Xiao Yan later, you don't have to do it. It seems redundant and has a lot of inner drama, which will make you think it is nonsense and hypocrisy. Moreover, your life experience is not bad. It is best to establish an independent power in the world in the future. There is also the inner boss Fenghou. , What the author writes is really not like an investor, but more like a person who sees the benefits and wants to make friends. It will be really beneficial to become a fourth-grade alchemist in the future, so he wants to hug him (a fourth-grade alchemist, Dou Wang, also has to save face). If you really want to find investors, it is better to find Hai Bodong. You have a different fire that can give Hai Bodong hope of breaking the seal. Moreover, Yafei is beautiful and can help you manage the trivial matters of business and power. The Fenghou gives me the feeling that it is more like driving a wallflower. It is better to wait until the power becomes stronger to help him advance to Douwang, Douhuang or Douzong. Moreover, he really gave you half a bottle of Ice Spirit Cold Spring and helped you find a few unilateral recipes, and with your refining skills Even if you are a pharmacist, you can do it yourself. Others are just running errands. You don't have to act like you saved your life. In the original book, Hai Bodong was gambling with his family. Unlike this errand boy, he really can't be considered an angel investor. It's too flattering to others and it's a bit uncomfortable for him to become an original stock without paying anything. It's better written in other places👌

I think it's pretty good, please update soon

It's pretty good and has some brains. It's not like being a stud in other novels.

A suggestion to the author: 1. In fact, the protagonist of the novel himself should not be taken advantage of and suppressed by the distant protagonist. If the position is that of the original protagonist, then you can help the original protagonist appropriately, but if not, then I suggest you bring the reader and yourself into it to see if you feel comfortable in it. I have read some cool articles that are suitable for gold fingers and will have high scores. 2. Don't be too verbose. I watched a chapter about fighting level 4 monsters. This would be boring. Proper detail is important Big cheers for the author! Five-star support~