Zhang Haobai Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

What is written is fan fiction, and what is posted is dog meat. There are a large number of second stories in the article. To put it nicely, they are called "second settings". To put it badly, he has not respected the original settings at all. I remember that during the Genius Battle, everyone in the virtual universe had exactly the same physical fitness and total mental power. But it was different here. His physical fitness was much higher than others in the virtual universe. There was no explanation why. He was the only one who brought in the physical fitness in reality. His writing style is not worthy of his setting. In fact, I feel that the author wanted to write about the beast-blood cultivation method to be very awesome. However, when he wrote it, I felt that the method was third-rate and very sensual. After cultivating this beautiful skill, I haven't seen the most awesome body in the universe for hundreds of billions of years. It's embarrassing to look at it.

Funny. The author punched me with 10 kilograms of force. I stabbed the author with the same force. Who does more damage. The monsters behind them are all larger. Isn't it funny to use fists?

What's the hook and setting, swallowing the world without understanding the rules, just practicing for a while? It's no use spending your time cultivating your genetic energy. I'll just upgrade it with nutrient solution.

I can still accept the world lord in front, but the world lord behind is really nonsense. When will a group of immortals become weak if all of them die? Or even perish? Let me tell you, even if all humans are dead and only one giant ax is left, the strongest person in the universe, humans will still be the pinnacle race. Immortality is only the seed of the strong. If you want immortality, Giant Ax will give you trillions of immortals at will. On the surface, there are only 100,000 human beings who can be crowned immortals, but those are seeds that can break through the Lord of the Universe. They are all humans in the universe. There are countless immortals in the secret realm. All the immortals in the front are dead, and they are directly pulled out from the secret realm in the back, giving them a chance to join the peak human race, and their combat power will not be broken. After being placed in the territory of the universe country from other places, after waiting for hundreds of millions of years, human race immortals will continue to come out. The other three peak groups dare not let the human group disappear and let the giant ax become a lone traveler, otherwise they will suffer the same fate, and only the master of the universe and the strongest person in the universe will be left? The most they can do is to suppress human beings and make them lose a few cosmic kingdom territories. The basic base must be reserved for human beings. There is no way this is the lineup of the strongest people in the universe.

Overall, I feel pretty good. I hope the author can maintain quality and quantity and update it until the finale.

I have read the latest chapter, but after reading it, I felt that the plot was a bit delayed. Then I don't want to talk about the rest. The body transforms into a divine body after becoming powerful and immortal. It's useless. After reading so many Devouring fanfics, you are the first one I see writing about physical fitness. The rules of Devouring are not suitable for physical training. No matter how strong you make your body, it will be useless after you break through immortality. There are also those funny tasks assigned to the protagonist after arriving at the domain master. I don't even want to read them. As for your inner world of perfect realm, I am also speechless. Some practitioners of the Ten Principles of Literary Studies directly dominate chaos. You should take it step by step. Overall, I advise the author to take a closer look at Devour. Colleagues read it from beginning to end. You will know why there are so many flaws. Why! You can do it. But we have to be logical. Doesn't the protagonist, the time-traveler, know? Physical fitness is useless after breaking through immortality, genetic multiples are useful.

It's not a good choice to choose, Zhang Haobai is my favorite. If you choose Li Wei, I can accept it. Zhang Haobai and his uncle are fucking disgusting. If you choose Li Wei, at least there is the selling point of his aunt. If you don't even look at it, give it three stars first.

I'm really convinced, who has nothing to do to practice boxing? If someone cuts you with a knife, pick it up with your hand

When writing a fanfic, you can set it privately, but you cannot change the settings of the original work. Otherwise, why would you still write a fanfic? Wouldn't it be nice to create your own worldview?

Swallowing fellow fans is like being carved out of a template. On earth, there are a bunch of cowards who help Luo Fenghong unconditionally. When they reach the universe, they become so popular that no one cares about them.