Plane Taoist Lord

When I first read this book, the author's writing was really too weak, and many of the plots were not very reasonable, including the character creation and image design, which were not very ideal. It can be seen that the author's conception was still very grand and beautiful, but due to the problem of writing, it was still limited. Fortunately, it has been improved in the later chapters, and And it is more obvious. Although there are occasional flaws, it is much better than before. I hope the author will continue writing. Since he likes writing, stop caring about other people's opinions and write out everything you want to write. If you want to improve your writing skills, you need to keep writing, make bold ideas, and don't limit your ideas to the audience's vision.

Can I add one more person?

The author's book is full of literary talent, beautiful rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. The novel of literature is thought-provoking and touching; the wonder of literature makes people fascinated; the essence of literature is all in vain if the sentences are deleted; the truth of literature touches stone hearts with passion. The article has a clear theme and rich writing. It deeply touches people's hearts and resonates. The clouds and moons of the eight thousand miles journey all entered the depths of my soul while reading. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere. The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping. I found this book review to be really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the traditions of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang Dynasty and the Song Dynasty to its fullest extent.

I feel that the author, you should not write the one about seeking justice for Zhang Xiaofan. It feels like there is no sense of immersion, which is a poisonous point... Everything else is fine, Come on, author! ! ! ! !

Life changes from the first word you type. On the 135th day of writing the book, I have indeed changed a lot. Before, I was just a mole-free young man who could play games, read novels, and occasionally "come to the West with one click". Even now, without the cloak of authorship, I am no different from you. I can't be called an author, I can only be regarded as an online writer. I have limited ink in my belly, so I can't write anything with connotation and depth. What I write is originally just a piece of writing, something to relieve boredom. But in the past few months, I have learned something called "effort" and "respect". In the face of all kinds of abuse and ridicule, I am able to get to where I am today because of the support of all my readers. I don't want to say anything more about these trolls who have no idea what's wrong with them. My profile page clearly states that I have to come in to make my presence known. Forget about storytelling, you still have to involve me and say how I am, so you just have to bring relatives to greet you. I don't know what makes you more noble. I use my spare time to code and write books to make money. I don't think I am inferior to you. Those books that you are interested in pursuing at the moment, the books written by the great god Platinum, even those classics by famous writers, I don't believe that what he wrote for the first time has been sought after by many people. People always need to grow. Of course, in the book review area, I also saw a lot of comments that supported me and defended me. Thank you, you gave me the motivation to keep writing. And to those book friends who silently read and supported me, thank you too. Thank you for giving me the time and opportunity to grow. "Don't watch it, give up", "It's not bad, let's take a look first". Your fate is determined by a single thought. Reading for five minutes and typing for two hours, I am able to persevere until now, everything is self-explanatory. Thanks! People are always growing and moving forward in the face of various ups and downs. I hope that one day in the future, I will also have a group of loyal fans and friends who can always accompany me and protect me! I've been working hard on this.

After seeing the chapter about entering the game, I decisively gave up the book, no matter what kind of opportunity there was. You can't avoid the desire to be someone else's dog.

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1. Anyone who leaves a negative review without even reading it will be deleted! (My introduction has made it very clear. Some people come in and complain without even looking at it. Who can spoil you?) 2. Comments that are mindless and contain swear words will be deleted! (You can read through the comments. As long as they are serious comments and point out shortcomings or poisonous points, regardless of whether they are good or bad, I will reply to them one by one. I will humbly accept the opinions and make corrections. Those trolls who come in and use dirty words to bring about family members, my family has messed with you? You don't have parents?)

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In ancient times, the portrait of Guanyin was male, but later it was changed to female because it felt inappropriate to worship a man all day long!