Empress: Your Majesty, Please Respect Yourself. I Don't Want to Be Promoted

Already collected. It's just that there are too few at the moment. If I gain some weight, can I spend 23 hours of my 24 hours a day writing a book?

The author got pregnant because her boyfriend had too much sex with her and couldn't hold it back. Don't you believe it? The author's failure to update is evidence

I said at the starting point that you could no longer write anymore and you deleted the comment. But here I still say, just delete it.

The author agreed to search for souls for the protagonist, and saw the suffering of the people in the world, and then the protagonist's heart palpitated. I thought the protagonist had become enlightened and no longer took death as the ultimate goal to serve as an official. But the result is still the same. If it continues like this, I will only feel that the plot is repetitive and dragging. To be honest Then you should change the way you write the protagonist and start actually doing things for the people of the world instead of aiming for death. It's just that the reward after the death of the system gives the protagonist something to hide, so that he can unscrupulously reform and do great things. As a result, you have clearly written the protagonist's mental journey there. See You remember the suffering of the people in your memory and then reflect on whether you can really let go even if you die and become an immortal. You have written like this, but you have not changed the same as before and continue to behave as before. Then why do you write that mental journey? Every time you write it in the same way. Death acts for purpose, and then there are all kinds of coincidences. If you read too much, you will really get tired of it. If you write about the protagonist's change in the memory section, this book would be really good, but the result is still the same. You really might as well not write about the protagonist's mental journey when he sees Chai Memory, which makes me feel really fake. Then later on, the protagonist ascended after death and wanted nothing to do with the heroine. I immediately didn't want to watch it, so I just gave up and stopped pursuing it.

It's a cool and refreshing article that I've only read once, but I don't mention any typos. It seems like I don't even want to read it again. However, this is also a common problem with all kinds of online articles, so I barely give you two stars. It should not be too detailed where it should be, and it should not be rough where it should be. It is not even a pile of words. The text is mixed and has no interest in continuing to read. It tastes like chewing wax. It would be more hopeful if artificial intelligence was used to continue writing your article. After all, machines don't output typos! For more than a hundred chapters, there has been no incident and nothing short of thrilling. As desperate as a life with an end in sight, such a refreshing article will never be fascinating, let alone stand out among similar people, and there is no possibility of publication.

A common problem with this kind of books is that if the protagonist wants to die in order to achieve his own goal, he will definitely offend the king, and there are only a few ways to offend the wise king. Among them, deliberately making mistakes regardless of the consequences is a big poisonous point. For example, if the protagonist exonerates a corrupt official, if that person is really a corrupt official and a slave to the common people, I would be insensitive to such a plot anyway. Although the final result is good, it will create a feeling that the protagonist will do whatever it takes to achieve his own goals. Therefore, the best way to eliminate this poisonous point is for the protagonist to solve this problem after achieving his goal. For example, doesn't the protagonist die and become an immortal? Then every time you have to mention that you will come back to solve this remaining problem after becoming an immortal. Although it is only a few strokes, it will give people a completely different feeling. Finally, this book is well written, there are no major problems, and the plot is very clever. It is worth reading.

Don't be a eunuch, author! ! ! ! ! If you renew again, I will give you all the monthly tickets and recommendation tickets I have saved, but if you are a eunuch, I will definitely scold you to death😎😎😎

I have read a lot of membership books. Except for some old books that I have read many times, I can hardly see anything new. Maybe it is because I encountered a new Internet era when I was a child, which made the books I read a little noisy. But this book gave me a different feeling. Although it is a conceptual invincible that is close to the system text, it is weakened to the greatest extent. The role of the golden finger is very good in shaping the image of the protagonist in daily life, such as Yuzhou Flood Control. Although you skip one chapter to read it, it is still a good book. For other books, you can skip a lot after reading two chapters. The most important thing about a book is not to make too much difference between the early and late stages. It is consistent with the name. This one is good. It is my first review. I hope there will be more chapters. Maybe you are under pressure in life and encounter difficulties. I hope you can get through it. I will post two more chapters. Good books are rare, so don't let them end unfinished. Come on!

It's beautiful, but the author is too slow to update

Don't cut the author in half, it's rare for me to find a good book. I will reward you