Tokyo: Something's Wrong with My Label

When I saw the plot in Chapter 19, that is to say, a person can label what he thinks is the impact. So why doesn't the protagonist go to the elderly activity center to do MLM, directly brainwash, and repeat it repeatedly, but it's no faster than in school? 🙃

Show me everything, ah ah ah ah ah!

Generally speaking, the more you watch it after it's released, the more disgusting it becomes. It's not that you're disgusting and you're a scumbag, but the description of this female video is too abstract, for example: Aragaki's fingers gently slid over the lottery ticket, as if he were touching a precious treasure. He lowered his head slightly and focused his eyes on the numbers, as if each number contained endless magic and could bring him the wealth he dreamed of. He gently rubbed his fingertips on the paper, feeling the delicate texture, as if he was communicating silently with the God of Fortune. Aragaki then carefully folded the lottery tickets in half, and then in half again, until they were small enough to fit safely in his pocket. . . . . . What are you doing to me? You just bought a lottery ticket, and the writing is so disgusting. In addition to this, there are also problems with the subject matter. I don't know how to write this kind of plug-in, a world without magic, an entry system, extraordinary, but you have been writing about love, love, love. Since you have written about extraordinary abilities, what the hell are you still playing like this? If you want the heroine's entry to be directly hypnotized, is it not efficient? Do you know how efficient it is? Of course, the main problem is the depiction of this female channel, which disgusts me to death.

It's a pity that he's a eunuch. The setting is quite good and the writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch. In fact, it can be seen from the start of the update that it has become slow. There is no outline and I have started to write hard. The eunuch is basically doomed.

The plot is good, but it feels like there is too much content about tag synthesis. There are also some places that feel very wrong or uncomfortable. For example, when we read and write, we may say on... Or in... (In), and the author should write on... Or in..., And when we say there is..., The author writes with..., Which feels very uncomfortable. It feels like it was written by a foreigner after learning Chinese or synthesized by AI. I don't know if others will feel this way, but I quite like the overall content.

Are there any novels of this type? The author recommends them.

The beginning was okay, but the writing fell apart later in the setting, the world was too small, and the characters were not detailed enough.

Just watch the beginning, it becomes less and less interesting as you read later.

It's great. It's already on the shelves. Why are there still two updates every day?

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