Mystery Comes, My Pollution Becomes More and More Abnormal
About This Novel
The bones burned to the ground, and gods and ghosts descended. Extraordinary, worn, old gods iron rules. Incarnation, old days, indescribable. Suiren, the initial sequence, the Hammer of Oath of Victory, the Eight-page School of the Tower, the Honorary Professor of Alchemy Dollology, the legendary Cowherd of Takamagahara, the breaker of the fourth wall, the Seven Deadly Sins, the first generation of Federation sword holders... Next, Mr. Make-A-Wish delivers the Confederation Proclamation. "Protest, protest, the destiny of mankind should not be subject to dictatorship." "If I am not free, I will beg for my corpse." Make a wish: "The new federal code, I only say three words, NZ, NZ, it's still fucking NZ" "I seem to have seen a wise king worthy of following me throughout my life. I will spend the rest of my life serving him." "My king is above, and we will defend your will to the death!" "Do you know how hard he works to make wishes... To protect the best wishes?" Before the end of mankind, I will be a natural disaster. My name is Make a Wish, make a wish to me when you read this sentence, even if the result... Is not what you want...
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Official(30)Scraped 5d ago
Crazy, crazy, hahaha, I want to kill Emperor Shen!
Three times, three times, you can only apply once in 48 hours, rejected within a few minutes, rejected, and suppressed for Chapter 41 until now, hahahaha, I have become it, I have realized it, I want a fucking knife!
I can't give it six points, so I can only give it one point. What can I say about this book? As a newcomer, the first book is already very good, but it has many flaws. First, it's very watery and wordy. It keeps writing about daily life, and the plot barely advances anything. God damn, I went to a massage parlor for a massage and it made him wet for five or six chapters. You guys can say it has Damn it, this is just one of the bad points. Another point is that the author wanted to write a bunch of group portraits of people and stand up the characters. However, in just a few chapters, a lot of characters appeared. The protagonist disappeared or disappeared at every turn. There was no plot. The writing of passers-by was not exciting. The protagonist did not appear. This book, how should I say, is quite rubbish. The author wanted to write a psychotic protagonist, but it always felt like a very deliberate feeling. It was as if the author added a piece of shit to the protagonist's character, which made people feel disgusting and smelly. That's it. These are the bad points of this book. The rest is readable.
I have a bit of literary youth disease, which makes me feel uncomfortable.
Very well written, keep it up 😘
The sense of fragmentation is very serious. The meaning of who is the leader and who is the player is unclear. There are too many supporting character chapters, and it feels like writing a group portrait. It was quite interesting to write the dating chapters. Then there is the transition. After Xiahou made that knife, why did he suddenly enter the stage of fighting zombies in school? It was very sudden. The protagonist seems to have broken into the Advent party this time in the final restart, and started to destroy it, leaving nothing else in mind. Although the pig's feet are intended to lie flat this time, it affects the reader's perception, so it is difficult to criticize this operation. Also, do you really plan to write a book in 7 days?
It's tasteless, and it's a pity to throw it away. The switching between characters and scenes is more difficult to connect than the PPT made by college students. Sometimes I don't know what I'm reading. It's inexplicable, like a drunken fragment. The content of the whole book is novel and attractive to readers. It is also refreshing, but it has no flaws, poor viewing experience, and difficult to follow.
Some people say that I have poor experience and I just slap them when I go up. Isn't that nonsense? How can I upgrade if I don't have good experience? I didn't know how to read posts before and never replied. I haven't been able to upgrade and gain experience. Now I understand that I can upgrade and gain experience by replying with 15 words anyway. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied these words and retrieved them when I saw them.
Who said I entered the palace! ! !
Come back to life, my love
Perhaps, it should be mysteriously revived!
QwQ Qingqiaoqiao QQ group
Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go
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Official(30)Scraped 5d ago
Crazy, crazy, hahaha, I want to kill Emperor Shen!
Three times, three times, you can only apply once in 48 hours, rejected within a few minutes, rejected, and suppressed for Chapter 41 until now, hahahaha, I have become it, I have realized it, I want a fucking knife!
I can't give it six points, so I can only give it one point. What can I say about this book? As a newcomer, the first book is already very good, but it has many flaws. First, it's very watery and wordy. It keeps writing about daily life, and the plot barely advances anything. God damn, I went to a massage parlor for a massage and it made him wet for five or six chapters. You guys can say it has Damn it, this is just one of the bad points. Another point is that the author wanted to write a bunch of group portraits of people and stand up the characters. However, in just a few chapters, a lot of characters appeared. The protagonist disappeared or disappeared at every turn. There was no plot. The writing of passers-by was not exciting. The protagonist did not appear. This book, how should I say, is quite rubbish. The author wanted to write a psychotic protagonist, but it always felt like a very deliberate feeling. It was as if the author added a piece of shit to the protagonist's character, which made people feel disgusting and smelly. That's it. These are the bad points of this book. The rest is readable.
I have a bit of literary youth disease, which makes me feel uncomfortable.
Very well written, keep it up 😘
The sense of fragmentation is very serious. The meaning of who is the leader and who is the player is unclear. There are too many supporting character chapters, and it feels like writing a group portrait. It was quite interesting to write the dating chapters. Then there is the transition. After Xiahou made that knife, why did he suddenly enter the stage of fighting zombies in school? It was very sudden. The protagonist seems to have broken into the Advent party this time in the final restart, and started to destroy it, leaving nothing else in mind. Although the pig's feet are intended to lie flat this time, it affects the reader's perception, so it is difficult to criticize this operation. Also, do you really plan to write a book in 7 days?
It's tasteless, and it's a pity to throw it away. The switching between characters and scenes is more difficult to connect than the PPT made by college students. Sometimes I don't know what I'm reading. It's inexplicable, like a drunken fragment. The content of the whole book is novel and attractive to readers. It is also refreshing, but it has no flaws, poor viewing experience, and difficult to follow.
Some people say that I have poor experience and I just slap them when I go up. Isn't that nonsense? How can I upgrade if I don't have good experience? I didn't know how to read posts before and never replied. I haven't been able to upgrade and gain experience. Now I understand that I can upgrade and gain experience by replying with 15 words anyway. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied these words and retrieved them when I saw them.
Who said I entered the palace! ! !
Come back to life, my love
Perhaps, it should be mysteriously revived!
QwQ Qingqiaoqiao QQ group
Go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go
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