
Hello, Industrial Evil God, Let Me Know
by The Rising Of The Rice Brave
About This Novel
"Did you know that a new evil god was born! - I saw with my own eyes that the evil god summoned his hell monster!" "Incorruptible horns, roller feet, transparent mouthparts, abnormally long arms, five claws of a funnel, yellow skin confusion method The heavy body shakes the earth, and the rumbling roar makes children cry at night! The terrifying magic iron bull will destroy all civilizations in the world! ""Do you know its evil real name?" "I heard the people of the Sin Domain call it - excavator? "... Wang Shaoyun became a wild god with no foundation. When he was worried, he accidentally contacted the future human civilization that had entered the sea of stars: "Leader, the extraterrestrial detector captured a strange statue and suspected to have discovered an alien civilization!" "What alien? I am not an alien! We are fellow villagers!"
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 8d ago
The topic is off topic and too wordy, but it's okay.
The writing is good, but although the protagonist has a strong sense of presence, there are too few scenes. The inner drama of the Paladins is too many and messy, especially when it comes to food, just a few bowls of noodles. The whole article is about describing what it looks like. There are many descriptions at once, and they are repeated later. Overall, the idea is good, the setting is okay, but the writing is lacking. I will give it 4 stars.
Three hundred years later, coal is still used for energy?
After reading Chapter 20, the main content is that a group of knights imagined the protagonist as an evil god and engaged in various void battles. It was very long-winded. With this page, you will be able to develop and advance industrial Cthulhu.
Unbearable to watch
The writing is good, although the character expression is a bit far-fetched, but overall, you can read it. If you write too little and update too slowly, the good food will become cold.
Can it be updated earlier?
If the number of words is more, you don't need to have an author.
They are all weak evil gods with great ideas.
Why do you want to write about 300 years in the future, and it's too watery, with all those fancy water words?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 8d ago
The topic is off topic and too wordy, but it's okay.
The writing is good, but although the protagonist has a strong sense of presence, there are too few scenes. The inner drama of the Paladins is too many and messy, especially when it comes to food, just a few bowls of noodles. The whole article is about describing what it looks like. There are many descriptions at once, and they are repeated later. Overall, the idea is good, the setting is okay, but the writing is lacking. I will give it 4 stars.
Three hundred years later, coal is still used for energy?
After reading Chapter 20, the main content is that a group of knights imagined the protagonist as an evil god and engaged in various void battles. It was very long-winded. With this page, you will be able to develop and advance industrial Cthulhu.
Unbearable to watch
The writing is good, although the character expression is a bit far-fetched, but overall, you can read it. If you write too little and update too slowly, the good food will become cold.
Can it be updated earlier?
If the number of words is more, you don't need to have an author.
They are all weak evil gods with great ideas.
Why do you want to write about 300 years in the future, and it's too watery, with all those fancy water words?









